You see her in the hallway
and all you do is stare
she skims you down like your prey
Approach her if you dare.
you think shes different cause she has black nails
you think “oh what a freakshow” for sure shes doomed to fail.
She does not wear her hair in curls
nor does she dress the same.
She does not wear diamonds and pearls
so now you think shes lame.
She does not wear little mini skirts
She does not wear high heels
She does not wear glitter belly shirts
So lame you make her feel
but does she care? Hell No She Doesn’t!!
Will she change? Hell No She Won’t.
So go ahead stop and stare
Shes a freakshow, but she doesn’t care.
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whoa, that’s good…i mean great!! people need to read this!!
chelsy
I enjoyed he poem. Good short ,snappy thoughts. I did wonder if telling in the 1st person might make it even better.
CWG
awwe pretty poem me-ha
that was a good poem….i would say it sounds kinda like you but you do wear high heals hehe
that’s how i feel i reely can relate
nise and its so true i loved every word
that is sooo cool!!!!!
you really have inspired me!!!!!
Plz make more just like that one………
:] This is how i feel because i’m just like this..never wear this stuff and my nails ARE black and stuff…my hair is straigh, short and black and i wear eye liner…i’m called wierd and freak and stuff..anyway…amazing poem…. :]