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When I love you

When we are so far apart.
Can sorrow bruise my tender heart.
I love you baby, I truly do.
Sleep is sweet when I dream of you.
All the world is like a rose.
Night is near so I must close
With that I leave one thought in mind.
You must read the first word of every line!!

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16 Responses to “When I love you”

  1. Gabby says:

    this is the best poem ever it's amazing

  2. rachel says:

    that joint was tight send me some
    more of your poems

  3. sade wilson says:

    this poem is live yo, i love it you go girl and do ya thing.

  4. monica says:

    this poem is durty your sick man you got no manners

  5. vinnie says:

    this poem is great. i really enjoy the creativity

  6. Maricruz Alonso says:

    wow i love all the poems you got here I’ve a few of my own:
    Feel Really Special:
    I feel really special when you tell me what i value
    I feel really special when you say i love you
    i feel really special when you hold me by my hand
    i feel really special when you tell me your my man

    THIS IS ONLY AN EXAMPLE THE WHOLE POEM IS WAY
    LONGER……. I LOVE POETRY ITS MY PASSION……….
    IM ONLY 13 AND I’ve A LOT MORE OF THEM

  7. shana says:

    This poem is wicked
    N e 1 dat ses it aint jus dnt no n e fin

  8. vanessa says:

    i love this poem its fantastic can you please send
    to my email more poems like these. they are great

  9. vanessa says:
  10. Ayla says:

    OMFG! this is sooo sweet i love the last line and wat it makes out to be,
    im a BIG BIG FAN!!!!!!!!
    =]
    <33

  11. Lily says:

    This is soooo sweet if a mangave this me i would chrish them

  12. Alesha says:

    that junk was too sweet send me some mo
    poems

  13. Vida says:

    wow, that’s really good, and i
    love the endding how, it all
    the first words make a sentence :)

  14. joshua says:

    your poem is so good I might say this poem to my girl
    friend. thank you for writing the best rhyming love poem.

    thank you so much

  15. ESTRELLA GRANADOS says:

    OMG your POEMS ARE JUST SO AWESOME!!!!
    KEEP UP DA GOOD WORK….

  16. TrippleThird says:

    i like this peom. i really do.
    i think i,,a try to memorize it :)

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