Im tired of always putting on a show
to hide the pain inside
to pretend nothing bothers me
when deep inside its at its boiling
Im sick of not having a true friend
Someone who understands
Sick of everything and everbody
Everything adds up over time
Making me angry and bitter
Sometimes I don’t understand
Why I feel this way
I don’t guess I ever will
Writings on the wall
That your too blind to see
Just open your eyes
Now look at me
What do you see?
Sometimes I want to cry
Sometimes I want to scream
I cannot, you wont understand
Im trying to remove a weight of my shoulders
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Your poem says it all. Im not a writer I cannot get the feelings down on paper but you hit every one of them. You seem pretty cool. Good job
thank you for the comment…..it took me awhile to get it all down…..i changed the ending of the poem so it sounds a little better.
I UNDERSTAND EXACTLY HOW YOU FEEL BECAUSE I FEEL THE SAME WAY AND I don’t KNOW WHAT TO DO.
this poem is very deap and very good….
i like it alot cos it explains exactly how i feel
anyway i got to go thank you goodbye
THIS PEOM WAS SO WACK Im sorry YOU HAVE NO SKILLS IN WRITING POEMS
that was absolutely beautiful…i couldn't write a poem to save my life but that’s exactly how i feel inside…
keep writing cuz you have talent…
hey this was a awsum poem your a awsum writer im a writer myself i write all my feelling down n make them in 2 poems but none r as good as that
i love you poem its great i feel that way but try to hide it
so you can you emai me back? goodbye
~K@T!3~
I UNDERSTAND EXACTLY HOW YOU FEEL BECAUSE I FEEL THE SAME WAY AND I don’t KNOW WHAT TO DO.
YOU ARE SUCH A GREAT POET
i love the poem. make sure you rite another one!
This describes everything it's hard for me to describe how i feel but this basically is all of it…nice writing