So close but so far away
Never wanted this anyway
If yesterday brings a better tomorrow
Im never gonna see today
My heart is broken
My scars split open
So this knife will be my god
And take me from this world
Take me from this world
Take me from this pain
Take me by the hand
Make it go away
Im leaving home
And if I never return
You don’t have to remember me
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your poem is soo true. i often feel that way and occasionaly go further but then i realise i don't want it i can still hope for a better tommorrow
get over it, in a while its not like your gunna be sad anymore, you think you will be, but you wont, and if you don’t believe me, then just wait itout, so get over yourself
Good poem…. i can relate to it… keep up the brill work…
Kat xx
that was beautiful, it has great meaning. It really effected me.
Hey courtney, your poem is really true, and something i can really relate to, and something to *Issac* that wrote the RUDE comment, obviously youve never felt that way before, and you don’t need to comment on peoples poems/quotes if you don’t have something positive to say about it, so get over YOUR self!! Anyways Courtney that’s a reallyyy good poem, It really has meaning that people can relate to and I'm sure it effected many, as it did for me!
Hey Courtney..i really love your peoms its really true about that..this life sucks…but i tried to commit suicide..and my boyfriend dumped me for it..and i stopped because i love him alot..so..but yeah i love your peoms..
Hey Courtney.I really like your poem..its very insightful.It makes me feel happy to know that there are other people who feel the same way i do.keep up the good work:)
hey, i liked you poem. i was so true. it like verything you said was real, and right.
girl,your poem was good.At one time I did feel like
doing that.Cause, my mom had left me and don’t
want anything to do with me.But know I thought
that wasnt something to do.girl you still have
a life ahead of you.
ITS NOT YOUR dad'S FAULT GET A LIFE YOU LOSER OH MY GOD I WANT TO KILL MY SELF CRY ME A RIVER
I hope you don't intend to kill yourself cuz you make money selling this
omg! i love this poem I’ve been looking ofr one like this…this is exactly how i feel all the time..thank you for such a great poem!
I think this poem is awesome!
That was a good poem but someone will always rememver you in 1 way or another so just keep your eyes open.
this is a serious pooem and i know where you r coming from.I’ve been there only 4 times in my life and the all ended me up in a padded room
hey, I love your poem, its so real and its liek you wrote what was inside me
Hey courtney waz up i really like your poems it
is really true
byebye
thank you a lot
brittany
i really enjoyed your poem…..i've been there many times in my life but i've now gotten over it and will help whoever needs it
yeah…this is a song by stone sour….so yeah….good try..but you didint write it….^_^
hey your poem was great so many people can
relate to this. I know i can. I’ve done some
things myself but my mansaid if i didn’t stop he
would leave me and i couldnt live with that. so
thank you for that wounderful peom!!1
there are times when I wish to die, but I'm too much of a coward to do it myself. that happens alot. so I wait for sweet death.
awesome! its the way i used to feel. you should see the
scars I have.
Yeah life does get you down (ALOT) but if you tell sum1 it will help. Because if you get it out of your system it's no longer eating you on the inside. if you ever do need sum1 to talk to i'm here. uwish1305@yahoo.com… no life deserves to end like that
Hey, that was a really great poem….i've been there
too, i've gone through the whole cutting thing, and
when i got used to the pain of hurting my self that way
i tried to take my own life little, i did everything locked my
self in a room got the knife, but then my cell phone rang,
i'd left it in the bath the night befor and i was my best friend
on the phone she saved my life i completely broke down
crying, that was 2 years ago…..now i mostly write poems like
yours try to express myself and its a great way to release some
of that locked up pain, less destructive but keep up the good work,
and things will strart to clear……
your poem is really understanding my sister commited suicide last year so yea i hurts your family really it does and you don’t kno what you have till its gone.. so plz try to work this out…
this poems…is wonderfully written i must commend but i guess its how you feel. I too have had to fight with those thoughts going thru my mind but then i realize that Im not God…hough you maybe gone……u'll still be living the relity of hell…don’t do it my friend jus tus God let him handle it that’s what i tried..he's tha only remidi!!!love