I laugh, joke and look as if Im having fun,
But inside Im crying.
I smile, chat and act crazy,
But inside Im crying.
I talk to you as if there is nothing wrong,
But inside Im crying.
I see you almost everyday but you have no idea how I feel,
And inside Im crying.
I don’t show how unhappy I fell,
And inside Im crying.
If a gang of lads were attacking me with bats,
You wouldn’t try to help,
You wouldn’t try to take care of me,
And you wouldn’t even care.
If a car hit me one day you wouldn’t be concerned.
If I died tomorrow you wouldn’t be crying,
You wouldn’t come to my funeral,
You wouldn’t at all dare.
If I committed suicide next week,
You probably wouldn’t even notice.
Even if I was on the front of a newspaper,
Splattered on the floor,
You wouldn’t flinch an eyelid
And Im sure you wouldn’t miss me at all.
If I was dead,
You might realise that you miss me.
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She/he is not worth your care.
I think so many people can relate to this poem. Its so sad but so true.
It's good to know i'm not the only one that feels like that…
I know where your coming from i feel exactly the way you do it's like you act normal in front of everyone but your hurt inside and nobody sees that well take care and if someones really your friend they will know your crying inside and try 2 hurt u
Sorry i mean they wont hurt you they make you feel better************
I like this poem….I can relate completely.
Though no one understands how I can look completely
joyous and still feel miserable. I thought I was
the only one like that.
This quote is great you r helping so many people express what they cannot say and this is exactly how i feel. people always feel like they r the only ones but your helping them to know that there are other people out there. i feel like im dying inside but at least other people know it other than just me.
I can relate to this poem alot. I recently lost a friend
of two years and now nobody cares and I don't have
a best friend that’s exactly like her and nobody cares
anymore about how I feel about her.
It really true want you are talking about.
I think is about me cause im always like this just crying inside of me but in front of ppl seems like i`m happy.
Thank you for your comment it make me feel like i`m not the only one.
this is so me! its so sad but that’s how i feel….. nobody knows that I’ve cried at night! i'm glad you write this poem but Im sorry at whateva happened 2 make you write this!
I feel like that a lot lately…hope you start to feel better about yourself…suicide isn't the answer, it's just an easy way out.
I can kinda relate to your poem.I ALWAYS want to
your poem.I just want to burst into tears everyday
but,I hold it in.Your gonna get through it.
i love this poem, i think its fantastic. everyones commenting on looking fine, but hurting inside but i take this poem differently.
to me, or how i relate to this, the writer is one moment ecstatically happy around friends and family, but they get mood swings where they suddenly get depressed and no-one knows they get like this.
I’ve this problem, and i also resort to self harm and everyone assumes its a cry for attention, no-one knows what people can get like. x
this poem affected me in a way that perhaps it doesn't affect everyone else. To me its love that’s hidden and needs something drastic to unearth it, but is it really worth it for that love to show through? I don't know if that's how it was meant to be.
you Chris… i know it can be so hard @ times
i have scars on my face, arms and legs
but please don’t kill yourself
plz
give yourself a chance
life can be a living hell
it can drag you down farther than you already fell
but the only way to see a rainbow
is to go thru the rain
the onlyway to find the light
is to get lost in the dark
and pray that som1 will show u the way
wen one door closes
another alwayz opens
it may take sum time…
just don’t get too caught up in the one that closed
to find the one that has opened
just give yourself a fighting chance
cuz even tho i have no clu who you are
if you died
i would cry
it would be davastated to know
that another eternitys been wasted
been lost and not found
and given up their last chance
there is so much hate and misery out there
to get caught up in
but theres also so much beauty and love
its just a little harder to find
but when you find it
you’ll find so many different reasons to cry
plz don’t die
not yet
u stil have time
~MoNiQuE/KXZ/Kar~
it's really good to read a poem like this because many times a person feels the same way and now it's good to know that Im not the only person
well, aside from the miss spellings.. its good… i can relate somewhat
Hey I love your poem. I was wondering if you could teach me something about how to
write poetry because I really like but I try to write and I can't
and it would be awesome if I could
I really enjoy it
thank you a lot in advance
I can relate to that completely. Like you said though, no one knows how I really feel and when I try to tell them they don't care enough to listen.
why do i cry when someone i love is gone then the next thing what happend is that person moves away what do you do but then you move to be closer to that person
The story of my life…
I really appreciate you 4 writing this poem
its puts all of those fake imitating out
there who CALLS themselves your FRIEND…B-S.
this was great work
i can relate alot in my life
its wonderful to read this good work
every day you smile, laugh and joke around. but you die alittle on the inside for every smile you crack, fake laugh you utter. I feel like this, I'm too much of a coward to kill myself. so I've just died inside completely, and live in my dreams most of the time. I'ts nicer there.
i can relate to this poem badly
its a good poem keep it up