Sitting inside my room thinking of you
tossing and turning, don’t know what to do
how could i miss you, someone i hardly know
this feeling’s so weird, but it’s starting to grow
i know for sure Im in control
but when i think of you, i start to fall
i know i should stop, but i don’t know how
so Im writing this poem to release it all somehow
love is a game, a game i could never win
it cuts like a knife, it pricks like a pin
i know if i’d love you, i’d soon feel the pain
you’re so far away and I will be waiting in vain
i started this poem feeling so blue
Im ending it now with words that’s so true
goodbye “love” maybe I will see you someday
‘coz if we’re meant to be “love will find a way”
wow.. i like the poem >.- its like how feel…
“how could I miss you ,
someone I hardly know
this feeling's so weird”
pls write more
hey i loved this poem i didn’t know how i really felt until i read this poem thank you for writing it you got REAL TALENT!!!!
girl i know EXACTLY how you feel!!
but sadly im not as optimistic most of the time
good luk grl
hope yall bump into eachutha one day
and he'll gaze into your eyez
as he apologizes and helps you pik up ir stuff
and he'll see somthing he's never seen
nights'lll go by
wem he cannot stop thinking of you
and he wont evn kno why
and then hell find you somday
and wen he does hell keep you close
4ever will he hold you
and never go away
Hi, im writing to you to tell you thank you…this was the perfect answere to my problem… I needed to say goodbye to somone I love and this poem made it that much easier.
girl..that was so touching…..and 4 some reason i know exactly how you feel….keep writing and inspiring others like me…thank you…
W4DUP TH0SE LINES ARE FIRM3 KEEP DR0PIN THEM … AND KEEP IN MIND D0NT KRY 0VA ANY V4T0 DAT W0ULDNT 0V4 you … 3s4.LoOn3y … PUTIN IT DOWN 4 DAT TRECE Y QU3 TE PARECE … S0UTHSIDE A' C-TOWN …
when your writing a poem make sure that you don’t
tell the readers that it`s happening to you. it seemed
as though you wrote the poem as the situation was
happening and that’s the worst thing you could do when
it comes to being a poet. any way i really did like it but
just remember what i said for next time k
Hey… that was such a touching poem and i sure so
many others feel what you were sayin. I know i did,
Its so complicated but this poem seriously helped,
thank for taking the time to give people some hope
with such a annoying issue. Keep up the super greeat
work!!!!! thank you again and God Bless!!!!…. oh yeah I
hope things work out or if not life gives us several
obsticals to tackle… im sure your strong enough to
take on this obstical….TAKE CARE SWEETIE!!!!!!!!
Hey,
I would like to thank you for writing such a pretty peom I know what your going through.I feel the same way and it hard to find poems like yours.If you have only other poem send them please.
Oi that was a real gwd poem.. Reminds me so much of me
Bub goodbye
girl don’t worrie about what vannessa……..or who ever that was who tried to change your style of writing ^^^
girl do what you do. i feel people like you, you speak from your heart and not from you as$ like some people we know (wink wink)
but girl stay strong and keep your head up ma'. 1
I loved the poem…its exactly how im feeling!!! glad 2 know im not the only 1 who has these feelings!!! thank you~~
Great Poem I really know how it feels.
I think this poem is excellent
i don’t know why but i just keep coming back
to this poem. i really enjoy reading it.
hey don’t worry about my previous comment
u did really well
hey girl well i really liked your poem you gotts sum talent. you know your poem made my realize sumthing if its really “lubb” then it will find its way rite? well that's pretty much it jst don't stop writting and when you do make sure it cums 4rom el CoRaZon…..
I love your poem I can really relate to it… *Aplaud*
Hey i like the poem alot!!!i can really relate 2 it!!!it sounds like your writing it from personal experience!!r u??well i liked it plz…write back!!
I like this poem alot and I know how she feels cause
sometimes I feel the same way when I'm in love wit
someone I really like.When your deeply in a relationship
your going 2 fall in love wit that person causeyou can trust
them and basicly your just in love
-Xavier-
AKA Lovable_Boi
this is my favorte poem.. it made me cry. not many can do that to me, so i thought this was an amazing. poem//
I JUST WANTED TO SAY THAT THIS POEM IS ONE OF THE BEST I'VE READ IN MY LIFE. I'VE FIND that’s JUST MORE THAN WORDS ON A PIECE OF PAPER BUT IS YOUR HEART IN A BOX. thank you TO THE ARTHOR FOR HELPING ME FIND WORDS TO MY FEELINGS. thank you.