He makes me,
He shakes me,
He breaks me down,
But you will always seem to care.
He knows me,
He shows me,
He throws me away,
But you will always be there.
He braces me,
He chases me,
He erases me.
But not you.
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hey i like your poem it kinnda relates to me
hey look this poem is good but add more to it because anyone could of made this up.
my 4 years old sister writes better poems then you dosorryto say but its true.
your friend Alicia
i love thet pome i remeber about this manthat i love and he love me it wear our first kiss i love it that right there i 4 in love with him.
its so true
that was very good poem don’t listen to what they say
yo shawty your poem is not dat bad … i kind of feel bout dis girl rite now…but try expand on your thoughts and be more creative on in your poem.. iight holla baby
This is a good poem but its kinda childish if you think about it.
Some advise, stop trying to talk like a nigger and spell your words right!!!!!!!
THIS IS A GREAT POEM! I WAS LOOKING FOR POEMS CAUSE I COLLECT THEM AND I HAVE ABOUT 600 OF THEM I KNOW ITS WEIRD BUT YEAH! MY NAME ISNT REALLY PUMKIN ITS ZENAIDA BUT THEY CALL ME PUMKIN goodbye
yo son this poem is banggin keep em,goin day hot
I think this poem is really good keep writing