I feel out of place so many times
The only thing that soothe’s me…..these rhymes
Time flies, comes back and sometimes stands still
Memories get me through but even that sometimes time can steal
The sadness, the not knowing, Why am I here?
The silence, the frustration……..that is my fear
The world around me just does not seem real
But then again thats just me
Thats how I feel
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That was reali gud poem how i found it was well my friend was feeling sad coz her grandma died so i was lookin up poems for a friend who is feeling sad and this poem came up and i thought it was wonderful well neway if ne1 has msn i love it if you added me 2 your list
love emily
U took the words right out of my mouth i think this poem is really great and hope i can read more
you don't have enought ime for your own memory and reniscence, that's awful.
I thought that your poem was very real and very interesting it
gave me goosebumps when i read it and i just wanted to
say that you are a very talented poem maker
I loved your poem, it really meant something to me because i can almost relate
i was looking for a poem that said how i feel … and i found it. This peom is really good so congrates.
love Sarah
That's a very good poem i liked it alot. Good job.. But i'm
a better writing. LOL
i feel your poem…its exactly how i feel!
hey dear…
i like this poem…
i feel the same feeling like that poem…
so congrate jose… make more poem like this…