Detached and hopeless lying on the ground,
no one seems to care so I don’t make a sound.
Silently crying the world turns away,
I called for help but my soul died today.
I walk through the halls crying and wishing for love,
I opened my arms and I was turned away,
I don’t understand why people are this way,
The world is so ruthless, so cold, so unfeeling,
I tried to stop but it all seemed so unbearable.
So I turned my back and the world turned theirs,
I sit and cry and no matter how hard I seem to try,
All I really want to do is to die.
Now is my turn to say goodbye..
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This is simply the best poem I've ever read.
That was a really good poem continue writing more.
I LOVE THIS POEM I WISH IT WENT ON I REALLY HOPE YOU CONTINUE TO DO IT!
that was the greats poem i've read
good one
A very nice poem, there. Full of meanings very few understand.
that’s a beautiful poem
it's simply remarkable but dark
WOW!!!! One word “Powerful” that’s all that needs
said to describe the art I read. Great job the
makers.
You r really good on this, very true and so touching and great poem…
on of the best, hide a sorrow and pain, i adore it… all the way… very good…
it was dark and yet in so little words powerful great work
I Must Agree I’ve Read a lot of poems and this is one of the best poems I’ve read. sad. but really nice.. hope everything is better.
its good!!!
i like the message of the poem…
i i can actually relate to it….
good poem!!!
i like your poemin but i hope your nexts poem is gone
happy so somethin so people some people
might do it i no i m8t who wants to kill herself
i just hope she never sees this poem coz i will be
over upset coz she wants to kill herself
but think they'll will see this they will think your mad
sry about this but I will say to
this is I would be allowed to rated this 1 to 100
I would rated a 2
well, your poem is such a nice…i really like it.
very deep,calm,mysterious…you know..i guess we we're breathing in d same world..a world full of loneliness,pain..:c
do you feel lost too??like Im??coz dats wat i felt wen i first saw your poem..
unloved.
unNoticed.
it was such a great poem…i can relate to it..
keep it up!!!
That was a really pretty poem sometimes I feel like
someday I will have to say goodbye to my best friend
her name is Brittany Gotte she is my best friend I hope
I will never have to say goodbye but if I ever do I
am so using that poem to do it.
I love this poem.
My life feels exactly like it.
I printed it and I hung it up on the wall along with my Wicked posters.
My friend Carie(not real name) is moving and when I read this poem I
just began to cry silent tears and no one could hear me when I did.
thank you fo rposting that poem on the web for some many
thousands of people like me could read it.
Abby(not real name)
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