The day has gone dark and cold
things gone wrong and out of control
what was said had to be said
there’s no point in crying to bed
I wish there was another way
but too bad it has to be someday
im just glad time is on my side
these feelings and emotions will soon die
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That's a good poem I right them too but I'm not as good and all are you Goth?
I really like your poem. It reminds me of something that just happened in my life.
That was awsome!
i really like it. i felt the poem and it was really deep.
i really love this poem a lot…it reminds me of my life….:D..thank you for writing it… goodbye
Wow this poem is very deep I really enjoyed reading it
I could really relate to it!!!!!!!
NA I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM ITS TRUE?!? I THINK ……NO I REALLLY don’t CARE SO SHUT UP…. IM USING IT IN MY L.A ASSINMENT
i really like your poem i. It was really awsome
it reminds me of something that i would write
or something that goes in my life a life
byebye
thank you
brittany age:13
I rly felt this poem….it rly touched me…i feel as if my life is like this…well i rly rly rly loveed this poem….i rite poems to…on depression…but im not that good as others and u…well keep writing…can you write a poem to me…and dedicate it to me…PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!well toodles…don’t stop writing
~*SaM*~
i rly rly rly liked your poem…i wanted to cry…well your poem rocks and if i could hand out the best poemist award it would go to u…well plz write a poem to me and dedicate it to me…plz…email me sumtime….blondie_n_proud2011@hotmail.com
*~JeSsIcA*~
this is the best poem i ever read
you can feel the feeling of the poem
good work
hey i love this poem i wish i could wright like that but I’ve 1 ? wat made you right this poem???