Before I knew I loved him,
before I even cared,
before I felt so lonely,
before he wasn’t there.
I took it all for granted,
the love he had for me,
I never knew I loved him,
until he ceased to be.
My one,my love, my all
will no longer exist.
I lost him,he’s no more,
The only thing that’s left,
is his deteriorating soul.
i made him feel like nothing,
I made him feel like shit,
this heart is oh so broken,
my own grave i have digged.
With his death my soul has parted,
no more reson to exist.
Without him Im nothing,
in my death I will be missed.
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Your poem could do without these lines
will no longer exist.
I lost him,he's no more,
The only thing that's left,
is his deteriorating soul.
Poorly crafted.
I like it. Very good.
like it!
andrew, I’ve read alot of your comments
on different poems and there all mean and horrible.
don’t listen to him. this poem was terrific and i loved it
great job
This poem was so beautiful because it relates to what happened to me. I love this poem!
i love dis poem it made me think about my love for my ex even though
he didn’t die it felt like he have.
i love dis poem but i cannot help da fact that i think that im starting 2 fall in love again cannot hide dis feeling from no one the poem that you wrote is like the way i feel i hope dat im not digging to my own grave i know that i will never stop loving again.
♥ w0www!! i reAlly l0v dz p0em.. ♥
♥ fantastic! itz s0 sad n true.. ♥