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This love shall last forever

Today I breathe heavy
Since fallen in love I have
As though being stuck by lightning
My heart has stopped at your sight

Your smile
Is as though the moon
Were smiling down on me
With her passionate glow
And just for a moment
I feel tremendous joy

Not a minute passes by
Without you in my thoughts
My life, my soul, my being
Needs of your love or
I might die

So like this poem
This love shall last in me
FOREVER

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5 Responses to “This love shall last forever”

  1. A FRIEND says:

    This was a really great poem i loved it it brought chills down my spine!

  2. sally says:

    this poem is beautiful i felt so close to this piece it made me realize how important love is and how precious each of us should feel when we know or have found that special person that can take our breath away.

  3. Marxy says:

    i love this poem. it makes me
    think about what the people
    in my life really mean
    your a really great poet:)
    this is awesome

  4. Jessenia *La Guerita* Lara says:

    … AWWW THIS WAS H3LLA sweet ! I LOVED IT, IMMA COME HERE MORE OFTEN TO READ THESE you KNOW, CUZ I LOVE TO WRITE POETRY MASELF! & I HOPE TO FINE SUM MORE OF your STUFF ON HERE. HOLLA ATCHA GRL *JESSENIA* AIIGHT

  5. CAROL says:

    OMG that’s SO CUTE!!!!!!I SO CAN RELATE 2 THIS I LOVE MY boyfriend 2 DEATH!!!!

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