Sometimes i just feel like i wanna die
or curl up in a corner and cry
sometimes i just lie to myself and say every thing is fine
that every thing will change in time
ill sit there and wait
stare at these walls and disintegrate
never look back to see
what a person i will come to be
life is crawling up my spine
and i feel im running out of time
u look at me in disgrace
but i just cannot run the race
i wanna run away
cuz i have nothing left to say
i almost feel sorry for wut im gonna do
cuz the vision i see is you
i dont hate you and ur not the 1 to blame
my feelings just arent the same
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I just want to say that your poem was great made me think
I like it a lot, its very good!
Hey, I think this poem is the best, its sooo
powerful hey. It just made me think about it
and it really hit me like a rock.
It's a great poem! I love it!
Wow.. sometimes you have to read something like that to make you realize what kind of person you have really come to be.. and its so sad cuz this poem pertains to me…
that’s a very nice poem. I give a ten lol. No really its good
I loved this poem alot…… honestly I’ve written one
just like this! I think that’s why i like it so much,
but i also love writing peoms,anyway this peom
was so G-R-E-A-T!!!! thank you, goodbye
Nothing in this world should make you feel you want to die .maybe sometimes but alot of people would be hurt
I don't know what your going through but trust
me I’ve been there and done that. just hang
in there i love your poem and i think you are a good
writer. just hang on and keep going don't
give up. I think all you need is a hand to hold on to
and i'm here I’ve a lot of friends that are probably
are going through the same thing and i'm there for
them. They tell me that they love having me there
well if you need someone to talk to just e-mail me
I kinda understand that you just want to die but
don't do something you will later regret. Well
peace outz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
love,
*Kelly V.*
This is a great poem. It fits right in with my situation
very good poem…i can feel it
I know how you feel just hang there because your not the only one in the world who feels the way you do.
this poem is bad I like it it sounds just like me but its really good just keep your head up
i thought this peom is pretty good….keep it up.
this is the best poem that I ever read…I can relate to this cuz I been there and done that and its hard to take back all the things that you been doing but that juss how life is…keep up the good work and keep writin your heart out cuz you never know whats gonna come your way in the future….GREAT JOB…im out of thes mug..peace love a-town!!!!!!!
OMG! I LOVE YOUR POEM SO MUCH!! TODAY… THIS DAY IS HOW I FEEL RIGHT NOW!! I give IT A 100!! I really do Love your poem…
~Izzy~
i really love this poem I’ve thought s about this poem and i really feel the same way
The beginnin of this poem is exactly how I feel now,
its not over a man, its my mom, but I feel like Im nothin
and never will be good enough
I THINK THIS POEM IS THE BEST I WENT THROUGH SOMETHING LIKE THAT MY SELF AND I WISH I WOULD OF HAD THE GUTS TO TELL THAT ONE GIRL ALL THIS INSTEAD OF CHEATING ON HER
i think it was great good job!
HEy. This is a really good poem….The poem sounds jus like i went through and still am. I wrote a poem jus like it lol….buh any ways good poem byye
OMG!!! I totally agree w/this poem…..I just hurt my BF so
much and now im in prison of sorrow where only my faith can hold me together.
sheesh……..well thank you alot that poem actually really helped!
omg i love your poem its so awsome i hope
u r ok what ever its that your going threw
i totaly undrestand what your going threw cause
right now im going threw the same sitution
and the matter affect i liked your poem so much
that i just sent your poem to a man that’s deepley in
love with me but i do not feel the same so hopefully
he understands soory you have 2 here about my life
soI will let you go oh by the way i write poems my self
WOW!!! This poem was really good it makes me think about what is going on in life…
Hey wuzzup?well its 4:51 and i just finished reading your poem and i thought it was really cool.i loved how it rhymed and how much sense it made to me! WELL KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
always yuri
it was a wonderful poem and it was just how i feel.
Im 12 years old .
I’ve always wanted to write a poem goodbye now
OH MY GOD! This poeM is TOTALLY PERFECT!!! i LOVE it!!!
this poem is like so how i feel.it a way good poem and
it feels good to see that maybe there are people who sometimes feel the
way i do.
well i've been helping out to firends with this situation and you knnow what i know we all want to die cuz of the problem but its not the right solution
love,
Veronika
i like it I’ve many connections so i don’t know maybe you can email me and send me some other poems so i can read for fun don’t worry i wont steal them or anything im not like that email me and Sabrina@msn.com or instant message me sabrina@hotmail.com ok goodbye
your poem says it all.that’s me all time just wanting 2 curl up an cry / die,
i praise you for all poems you may do and courage you get 2 do them
Superb….
Awesum…..
Touching…………
don’t have Adjectives so simple but so deep……