My life is like a movie
I wanna take it
and rewind it
and forget about what’s behind it
Sometimes I sit and wonder who designed it
Who took a movie and my life and combined it
Some people’s life is a peace of mind
but not mine
Its so intertwined
with people that don’t understand
just strictly demand
Then they got the nerve to wanna be your friend
but you’re ready to make a stand
On the other hand you wanna fit in
So you raise your chin
and give em a grin
Now you call em your friend
but sooner or later the friendships gonna end
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That's the imperfection.
That poem was well written and it had a nice rhyme scheme
The poem is interesting and it also touched my heart.
Great poem,keep it poem.
i think this poems is very good and interesting it had a great rymth stlyle. Well its 1 of the best poems I’ve ever read.
WOW you have no idea how true this poem is for me! I just got out of a friendship that I thought would never end but come to find out she was bad mouthing me and I asked her about it and she just said that she never said that but i knew that she was lying to me b/c i read w/ my own eyes! I was so upset and now she won't talk to me about it b/c she doesn't want to fight about it and its sad! That’s what I had to say hope you liked it! It was a great poem!
i just want to give props to Lameese Carmenar because that poem is so true. sometimes i just think that there is no such thing as a true friendship .
I love this peom. My life feels like a moivie all the time, I never know what is gonna happen!
Really nice peom
u know you did good on this hahahahah
this poem stinks! i wanted a happy poem not
“this friendships gonna end” crap! Make a happyier
poem andI will b happier!
It was really good!!!
Haha I think this is the cuteest poem.
Also, It's kinda like a rap.
I LOVE IT
*Cutiee PA-TUTTI*
It was Very cute.
I really LOVED it
This poem really touched me it made me
understand that some friends aren't really
worth wating for that you shouldlet them go
WOW!TATS GREAT GOOD LUCK KEEP IT GOING ON
i really loved this poem can you email me and we can talk about it
this was a great poem and keep writing
To be honest, I don't really like this poem. It's so negative and so dull.
There's a good source of words you wrote that fit in with this poem, but the way
you said that friendships always end is what I don't get.
I'm a poet myself and I'll admit, I've written some negetive stuff, but stuff like saying
friendships always end is not that apatizing. And not inspiring for viewers to read.
Its true but not true sumtyms…But most of the time its true….
omg i love this poems it almost sounds as if its a
its so good i love the part were at the end all the
words rymed
LOVE THIS POEM IT ROCKS THE BEST OF THE ALL
i like this poem because i went thro sumthang just like it and is true sum friendships will end
Hi Author…..
don’t write a poem that can discourage people or
it can create a negative idea into a person… please
write a happy poem… but your poem is a nice one..
keep up….
i agree wid 'sarah” and 'helixe” dat it shud inspire d readers…
buh yeh you wanted to xpress your feelings and datz wat you cud think about.
writing a perfect poem includes putting up d rite feelings and thoughts..
m sure you wud get wat i mean
u have written a ralli nyce poem, i loveed it ^_^
keep it up !!
and dun forget to be correct in yoh lyf!
this poem sounds great i love it
THIS IS VERY GOOD POEM I WISH EVERYBODY WROTE THIS POEM AS I DO thank you AND LOVE you men
YOU KNOW I PERSONNALY BELEive EVERY WORD IN THIS PATICULAR POEM, YOU THINK YOU CAN T RUST A FRIEND WHEN IN REALITY THERE ALL RATTLESNAKE, TURN AROUND AND BITE YOU..
kind love it
omg, dis is really touching and i just love it!!
keep writing more!!
dat's wuzzup. i'm diggin da lil flow you had going wit yo ol' punk as$ lil b*tch as$ mafucka…lol
whats good shorty? nice poem….i give it a encore, do you want more. holla atcha manall day
this poem relates to me in so many ways its not even funny its such a good poem and its true what the poem says so the person who wrote it you did a good job writing it
the poems are nice but too long.i can give three stars for this poem.
its a very nice poem. try to do a rap out of it
I totally agree with it …nice
OMG!!!!
that poem is so goooooooooooooood!
its so hard for me to put it in words!!
oh. . .its so good. . .ur poem is so real. .i really like it. . .u have such a nice imagination. .
it's is a nice poem…
and i never heard any poem
like this before…
hope you can do better than
this next time…
great poem really liked it!!!