Wasn’t there a day when you were young, taking orders and holding your tongue?
Wanting to prove you have what it takes knowing you will make it, despite your mistakes.
Wasn’t there a time when you fell in love, the kind of love one only dreams of,
And wasn’t there those who had some doubts before knowing what it was all about?
So hear me when I say I think it’s unfair when all you say is that we’re going nowhere.
And it’s unfair how you can already decide the future of my life and how I feel inside.
You say don’t become a statistic as you stereotype my face.
You think you know me yet cannot put yourself in my place,
trying to follow dreams and follow them through,
with everyone saying they’re too good to be true.
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IMHO, a person who judges you in this way and who is not brave enough is not worth your feelings.
I love this poem!!!! i can so totally relate to it!!!! this poem is bomb diggish!!!!!
This poem reminds me of times when others doubt me accomplishing my dreams and goals…it reminds me to keep going. Good job!
I really like your poem. It meant so much to me. You will never know. I would love to hear some more of your poems. Do you have anymore i could read? It would mean alot.
i think this was a great and interesting poem and i know a lot of ppl could relate to it !!!!
i really liked this poem and just by reading it i felt the heart break that the author went through and felt
the poem was great it brung back memories that i tried so hard to earse
but i know that not getting over them was gonna cause more pain and heart ache in the end
I really enjoyed reading this poem and I could relate to every word.