Why am I here?
Why don’t I die?
Once I was happy, confident and carefree
What happened to the days when I could be me,
On the surface I smile and act like Im alright,
But when I get home I cry all night,
This pain I feel why won’t it go away?
I wish they’d stop what they are doing
coz its not okay.
I don’t know what Im doing
and I don’t know what I’ve done,
I wish they’d just leave me alone
because they know they’ve won,
I wish that they could see,
That they’re killing me!
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Hi this is me stephannie and i love your poem this is a wonderful poem
Hey this poem makes meee cry i read the words and it brings me too tears … i LOVE YOUR poem i really can relate….. i feel like i wrote it myself .. i read it too my best friend and shes like r you sure you didn’t write that . i plan on showing it too my mom along with a note .. b/c I’ve tryed to explain too her how i feel but she does not understand …. maybe this will make her realize.. anyways i just thought i should thank you b/c your poem has helped me realize alot of diff. things .. keep writing you never no wen you can touch someones life!
It a really sad poem but I loved it. Its like my life
I mean I do cry at home all the time because people
people don’t know when to stop!?!?!
I love this poem because
me and my man just broke up over a
bunch of people talkin
smack and this is exactly how i've felt since!!!!!!
I m a man but i can relate to your poem cause me
and my girl just broke up and she slept with
another nigga the day after it and cried my heart out
this poem i can rrelate to
You have no idea how i relate to this poem. It describes everything that i feel or stuff that has happened to me. This poem has alot of feeling to it and i think is the saddest one I’ve read cause i understand what its saying and it means so much.
I think this poem is good. It gets to you its like you aready know me. Well keep writeing your very good.
Very Very deep poem and i like it a lot .
this poem really expresses what im going through right now and
that’s exactly what im feeling
I want it all to go away but it wont it just stays there