I have fallen,
Gone so low.
You pushed me over the edge,
I started falling towards hell,
I could feel the heat of the flames
On my bare flesh.
My screams were drowned out
By the scorching flames.
There was a bright light,
A cool wind from the flapping of wings.
My Guardian Angels had heard my cries,
Felt my pain.
They took me in their arms are carried
Me away, out of Hell,
To be with them in Heaven.
Forever.
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hey …. great poem and it means alot
i understand what you are saying …
you have a great skill and you should continue
to write …. and may one day youfind endless love
signed candice
I really enjoyed this poem….
I has touched me after I’ve read it.
My feelings about these things have made a really big impact on my life. I’ve been through alot and after reading this about a guardian angel…it feels like alot of my problems have been solved
thank you very much for putting this on the net… if you get any time and you are having any kind of problems Im here for you to write to…thank you
Nice inspirational poem! Keep on writing an inspiritional poems.
CSR
that was a really good poem.
im not gonna saykeep up the good work because in actual fact its not good
the poem is imense but why its written isnot good
so in actual fact people should tell you that if tht is your refugge then carry on
but if its just another way you feel pain
then cut yourself off from it and never look at it again
reply if it helps
I really love that poem.
It inspires people to write about anything they want to then express it to the world.
Its very emotional.
And touching and I enjoyed it.
i love this poem its very much like me in my life