I guess it is too late…
You weren’t lying at all…
Now that Im replaced…
No reason to stand tall…
I wish this didn’t happen…
You found another one…
I didn’t mean to get in the way…
Im really sorry…
Guess you and me are done
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Im really sorry
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I honestly didn’t like this poem, sorry… but um
try to make more sense… trust me i write poems
and im getting published… this will not get you
anywhere.. thank you, DUde!!!
I loved this poem, it relates exactly to what happened to me. this is one of the best sorry poems I’ve found. Keep up the good work, don’t mind what the other person said, you will be good in life.
Hey i loved this poem i write poems and i thought it
was really good. screw the other person this poem
will end up probably getting somwhere very famous
hey well keep up the good work and when anyone
wants to put you down like “dude” then tell them to
okay
THIS POEM WAS REALLY GOOD
i seriously did like this poem! don't worry bout that otha person she doesn't kno wut shes talkin bout! it shows how strongly it hurts when you lose someone for someone else! good job
I liked your poem. It reminds me of something that happened to me.
I think that you need to add more to your poem. i just have 1 question do you write poems ror the fun of it or do you really mean them?
awwwwwww that poems well sweet
i love this peom i think its great…i know that i been thru that and done that but sometimes it's hard to get back what you want but juss gonna keep movin on wit yo life..KEEP UP THA GOOD WORK….IM OUTZ!!!!!!!!.
Hey that poem's really nice and
it's so nice to me
because i can relate
to it keep writing i mean I write too
and you're the first person
I've ever considered criticizing
I really like this poem alot….Some people just don’t know good poetry when they read it…. Plus that dude probably is jealous because he can't write something that good, don't let ppl bother u…. Write everyday it will eventually get you somewhere in life… Great job on this poem:)
Awh… this is sad.. I like this poem and i think its sad too… b/c that just happend to me w/ my friend… now, I don't know what to do:( I miss him
~Izzy~
hey at least she was tryin no matter how hard you try and complish this you will suceed i reall like this poem screw the other man he doesn't know sqwat or he wouldn't be even talkin
these poem is really great!
i'm going thru alot, because my boyfriend cheating
on me with another chick, and i read
and felt the words of your poem and
i felt that the poem was made just for me.
i reely liked th poem…it has to do with th exact same friendship I’ve with a friend of mine, wut would you do in this situation????thank you email me with any answers1!!
Can you make up an poem
about a girl lying and hurting their
boyfriend?
whew!!!! nice one!!!
Hi I think that your poem is fantastic girl!
you rock! keep it up! hit me back! Later, lanny
and don’t mind that stupid dude comment. hes dumb! he just jealous cuz he aint got skills! hhaa
YOU KNOW WAT DON'T PAY ATTENTION 2 PEOPLE THAT TRY 2 PUT you DOWN LIKE 4 EXAMPLE “DUDE” HE IS STUPID BUT I REALLY IOVED YOUR POEM ITS PEEEEERFECT KEEP IT UP
YOU KNOW WAT 4GET “DUDE” HE IS JEALOUS CUZ I LOVED YOUR POEM ITS JUST PEEEERFECT KEEP IT UP
omg…its like i rote it myself. it happend to me 2 n i no exactly how you feel n it hurts sooo bad. dnt it? nway its gd to no im not the only 1 but not so gd dat other ppl av to go thru so much pain 2 anyway thank you x x x
heyy good job on this.
i like it.
ppl who don’t appreciate it are porbly just jelouse
so don’t worry bout the haters.
good job anyway.
NICE
Firstly, you all have far too much time on your hands. Secondly this web site is hilariously over emotional, I would not be suprised if you are all drama queens.
beautiful poem, a bit short though
Im sorry but I agree with “dude” Im a poetry person and my teacher is sending my poems to someone so they can publish then but this poem wont get you anywhhere….sorry
sup sarah umm i kinda didn’t like your poemsorrybut email me when you want to jck@msn.com any1 can email me i really don’t care
rlely nice poem 5 stars
Wow!!!!!!!!!!
That was awesome
U R really good
screw N E body who doesn't like it
seriously.. i love your poem.. screw those who criticize you..
just keep up the good work and continue writing poems to
express what you feel..
I read this and it really made me sad. It reminded me
of me and my -EX- that im soo in love with still and
im not ready to get over but he likes another girl
and there is nothing i can do to change his feelings!