If you ever came to feel my pain
or drowned for a day in my lonely rain
you would know what its like to suffer in my hell
if you listened to the tales I have to tell
you would never again pass judgement on me
you may even understand why sometimes I flee
why I sometimes hide when the road gets rough
or run away when life gets tough
if you spent 60 seconds locked inside my head
you’d understand why life I dread
if you took a min to feel what I feel
you understand that my pain is so real
if you for once, choked on my tears
or had to fight through my fears
if you had to spend a day in my solitude
my nightmares you couldnt elude
the judgements you first passed would fade away
you would probably hit the ground and pray
to never again see the things that I’ve seen
to never experience the dreams that i dream
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whoa. When i first read this so many emotions ran throught my head. you speak so passoinatly about this subject, in my eyes. i you truly feel this way then may i say god be with you, always.
This poem is so true about lonlieness and being depressed.
You snapped that was realllly good I feel the same way. Keep writin!!!
Im in class at the moment and im reading ALL of the poems and comments on this site personally I’ve not found any that I like but I always have different opinions than others…but this poem was actually VERY good it sounds like you have a tough life and it amazes me on how real this poem is no body really takes time to see things from the other persons point of view….I have to admit I come from a family with a lot of money and im very athletic and scocial and I guess ppl would consider me a prep and I know I’ve teased kids in the past and at times I still do
but anyway this was a great poem and I loved it!GOOD JOB DEAR!!!!!
Your poem is amazing~!!! its sad that to sometimes feel this way but there will be people to cheer you up
i feel your emotion in your poetry…
I Thought your poem was very deep. Im able to relate to this poem because it describes what I am and have been going through in the past few months. My family & friends don't understand how I feel & I wish they would. thank you for such a powerful poem. Knowing that others feel the same as me helps me get through this black cloud in my life.
Jullian, you must have alot of bad things happen to you in your life for you to write this poem. I love this poem. Keep writing poems like this…
i no how you feel…….i respect your writing a great deal
HI ICAN RELATE TO THIS POEM its ME I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONLY lonely PERSON IN THIS WORLD IM TRYING TO STAY FOCUS
Hey Jillian,
Wow… when i was reading your poem i was just like speechless cuz I’ve been feeling the same thing and i can totally relate to your poem. I LOVE IT. I mean there are some people in this world who just don't understand me and i wish so bad that they would. i wish for the same thing if only they could spend some time in my shoes. your poem is very well written. anyways… I really hope that happiness finds you and you find happiness and i hope that you smile and laugh with joy.
If only everyone could see our pain, maybe someday our pain would be gone….
This is a good poem. Sometimes I think peoples
need to take a min. in my shoes also.
if I only I can say those words to him…
*sigh*
that’s an amazing poem
reali deep
those feelings are so real
I like the poem “My lonely world” so sad and deep…
yet it pulls me in. I really enjoyed it.