I sit here alone in the night
wondering what is wrong with me
no one ever cares nor will they ever
there’s a hole in my heart waiting to be filled
I fight back the tears
hoping no one will notice
while at the same time I wish they would
Why doesn’t anyone notice?
Why cannot they see me for me?
and not some rumor that everyone believes
Do I need to change? should I change?
I used to think not
but now Im not so sure
they all rush past acting like I don’t exist
maybe I don’t
maybe I don’t allow myself to
What do i need to do to make you notice?
just once, one time
I want to feel like i belong
my heart is empty and it waits
for how long I ask…
a year? a month? tomorrow?
to me it seems like an eternity
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This poem is talkin' about my life. It touches the soul of the person who is going through this.
I love this poem! I relate to it in some ways. People don't understand how hard its..
There are so many ways inwhich i can relate to this
poem, in everylife there are tyms wen you jst feel so
alone and fink tht you r invisible to everyone around
you! a great inspiration! fanx
ur poem shoud be callled .. invisible or no seem to notice .. or here alone .. ghost .. or something ..
this really sums up how i feel most of the time, to whoever wrote this, i hope you don’t feel like this still
so sad but so true
omg this poem speaks so much about me i feel soo alone all the time and i hate it atleast i kno Im not the only one thank you
OMG, This is exactly how i feel,so alone and you just
want to be noticed. Good to know i'm not the only one.
Hope you got through it, at least some one will/has.
I can so relate to this is so many ways.
Life is hard and its like no one understands nor will they ever is what it feels like and all.
I think that if people really wanted us around and all
they would take more time to notcie then just not
to and to walk away.
no offence to the people who replied but
how far have you all gone in sadness?
do you know what the crazy place is like
or how addicting its to cut yourself
well i do so don't try to relate to something
you have no clue about.
This poem really seem to express how i feel sometimes….but i feel that i shouldnt have to change myself for others…if you don’t like me for me then don’t hang out with me, but don’t make fun of me for being myself. You will find a person who likes you for you, I haven’t yet, but I’ve hope…or at least I try to
This Poem explains exactly how i feel, when will people notice you are there?
This is a great poem. It relates to many people including myself.
hun i can totally relate to this poem but remember you wont feel like this forever. When you feel at rock bottom the only way is up. Remember that. Fabulous poem says it how its and is.
I don't see how you people can call this an “inspiration”?
This is how people actually feel for god sakes.
I find this to be very true for some people, but so very sad.
I can totally relate to what your saying.
It's who Im. A nobody
we share the same dilemma..it hurts!! waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..
wow,i love youre poem i can relate in so many ways
this poem is kinda how i feel i feel alone n invisble but somethimes i fink i shud change 4 the people that don’t like me i spend most my days hiding n i put on a brave face but inside im weepin i avI will nesses from this feelin n its like im waiting 4 ever to be notied i rite my feelings into poems . i always said i wouldent change 4 any one i use to say apsept me 4 me as im no one eles there no point in hiding your self but if it makes it easier in my life im ganna have to your poem is amazing keep it up
xxxxx
oh my god,
this is also another poem that suits me perfectly.
i love this….
i always felt that im invisible among my frens…
with them i felt i don’t exist….
anyway….
i still love my frens…..
yers i no wot you mean.. like im a 14 year old girl who
isnt very pretty
my friends r all really popular, right.. but im not!
like when we have 2 hav partners in class .. all my friends
go 2gether and i hav 2 go wiv some1 else
they neva wait for me if i hav 2 go somewhere or nuffin!
i feel as though i don’t exist or every1 cannot see me!
that poem i guess helped me 2 see otha ppl
feel da same way.. but the only thing for me is.. its too late
it truely reflect and express what i'm going thru or feeling now!
This poem may aswell just be me.. its exactly how i feel everyday of my life.. at least I'm not the only one, but it sure feels like it
thank you so much for writing this poem
It makes me feel so much better, knowing that someone else in the world feels the same that I do. I really wish you would have put your name and email, because I really want to see some more of your works.
THIS IS HOW SOME PEOPLE'S LIFE IS SO SAD BE YET SO TRUE!
I LOVED THIS POEM!
hey i love this poem..lyk i can relate some how but not 100% n tha'ts wat grabs my attention the way others sufFer more then mi…it's great even the title and all don’t let no one change your feelings of this poem n if you realli feel this way jus think that your a veryy loveed person don’t need to b told as long as you love yourself….
its how i feel every day
i can see your poem has touched
so many people in so many ways.
it wsa brave of you to come forth
and write this poem about your life.
you may not know just how many people
lives youve changed with these words.
but if you just don’t k now how to cope
or if any of you need someone to listen
im only an email away.