How come Im here?
taking up space
I don’t serve a purpose
I will never get a date
No one likes me
and I don’t like them
It all seems to me
one great big scam
They all smile acting like nothing’s wrong
but I know what they are thinking
why don’t you just run along….
They don’t want me here and
I think the same way
Let’s get outta here
Let’s run away
One day I will belong
You will see I say
I think to myself
“I hope Im right”
“I hope Im okay”
cuz I don’t think I will be able
to live another day
Listen…Everyone has a purpose on Earth…Even if your “cool'…”a loser”…”nice or mean”…anything….if you were put on this earth….you have a reason to be here…everyone has a purpose…and I know I don't know who you are….but you will do your purpose..and it will make our world better…you don't take up space….you make our world better…remember that
Of all the poems I’ve read lately, yours is the only one
that has actually made me cry. I just broke down into tears
as I read this. You have a gift with words, a way of evoking
an emotional response from your reader. Please, keep
writing. And keep on sharing what you write. thank you!
your poem makes it sound like you are only sad
because the man you like don’t like you back. That
is stupid. people who “act” sad just for stupid
reasons like that are dumb. people like you make it
the reason while real depressed people are looked
over.
I love your poem I feel the same way. You should be proud that you can write poems and get the things you feel inside out because I know I cannot do that. I’ve held everything inside my whole life. I don’t know how to get rid of the pain and yet you can write it in a peom Im not that great at writing. I have a sister that does that but yet I don’t know how to. I hope life gets better for you.
coming from my point of view
this is a call for a friend or help.
The only thing I can suggest is:
don't start cutting and look for God.
He is always with you and
promises to never leave your side.
if you truely need a friend
let me be that person.
your poem is a 10.
oh and if you think i feelsorryfor you
i don't
i feel your pain and i don't want you
to do the things i did.
one of the most meaningful poems I’ve read
in quite a while.
brought a tear to my eyes.
Every good.
listen to depressed one.
I’ve been threw the depression stage in
my life.
and im only 15 years old.
i don’t want anyone to do what i did either.
so i know where you men are coming from.
listen, I’ve my share of ups and downs in my life
and i know how they can effect others. Im not going
to sit here and be optimistic on life because i know
somtimes it sucks but there's always a postive where
there's a negative And friends they just don’t grow on
tree's man, you have to learn to like people. Even if they
are different, “every stranger is a potential friend” so don’t
let them come to you that takes too long, make people be
your friend and you will don’t just sit back and let the
world pass you by…alright, I hope all goes well with you,
“aim high to the stars, and if you miss, you still might land on the
moon”
l8er dan
Wow… this is a very good poem ..
it explains everything you r very talented
i write to so i know these things…
-me-
for all those who feel this way, take a walk in the rain, or the
sun and breathe the positive ambiance of life.
dwell not on dulls and rock bottoms, but on high mountains
and high hopes. thrive on imagination and when all is lost, go for another
walk in the rain, or perhaps the sun.
wow this poem touched me!!!!
i feel the same way…this poem really shows how i feel
That made me cry. I can definetely relate…keep writing you do have a purpose even if you don't know it yet.
this poem reminds me of a friend I’ve with low self a steem.I will give this poem tomorrow..
thank you
I love your poem i feel the same way 2 but you just gonna keep goin it will all work out sooner or later!
ur poem sounds like the one i wrote in my journal, isnt that so weird, i know how that feels, but i met my boyfriend and its not what you expect, and i thought i was happy with him until someone else came around, nothings wrong with u..
I loved it and thought it was beautiful because I feel exactly the same way. I just want to end it all.
That was a very touching poem.
But you have a reason to be on this earth.
Your not an outcast to anyone.
And god sat you here for a purpose.
So enjoy it,while you can.
Anyway I enjoyed your poem.