I wish I could tell you
the way that I feel
So tortured inside
I want to say so many things
but I cannot find the courage
Can you see through my emotions?
I try to put on an act
Can you see through me?
It cannot hide much longer
Sooner or later it will come out
Sooner or later I will tell you
I just hope you love me, too.
Hey you got a cool poem.
is it true?
im trying to make poems that are about real life.
I’ve made 2 so far but having a little trouble.
could you help?
it does not have 2 ryme.
thank you.
Vanessa
hey! that’s a good poem its true when you whant him to like you as much as you like him but he wont let you know.I can relate to your poem and i know how you feel
hey! that’s a good poem its true when you whant him to like you as much as you like him but he wont let you know.I can relate to your poem and i know how you feel
i can relate to this poem so i think it's nice….
i feel the same way!!!
i really liked it even though im 13
did you write this poem?
OMG …this is a very nice but touching poem i loved it !
hey i realy like your poem i realy fell the same way
of tell the person that you like .and what you
said its very true!.
omg how sad i feel the same way
i guess you really like the man well laterz
eilow..
nice poem…
but i think you lack the touch of putting the poem be realized as its…
as in be more emotional…
for the reader to feel it the way you feel it tooo…