I walk this empty hallway,
my shoes untied,
followed by the shadow,
of things i should have tried.
As you pass me,
your presence hits me,
I fall on silent words,
Did you notice me?
Take this heart,
because it was free,
how do I stop you?
how do i catch thee?
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Hi Jones!
Great poem…well written! Keep it up…I hope to see some more here, from you soon.
Good luck!
Anwesha
Hey Jones,
These are good! I just wanted to say good job, love them!
-Sarah
That poem actually reminds me of my love life.
I love this man Patrick Farr, but i don’t know if
he knows Im here! Good poem though.
short, concise yet beautiful, well written!