Everytime u talk to me i dont no wut to say
bcuz every thing u say to me takes my breath away
i cannot express my feelings bcuz u have stolen all my heart
the thought of us not together tears my world apart
when im with u its almost more than i can take
it feels like im dreaming .. and i never want to wake
i never want to lose you i always want u there
always there to lean on always there to care
“forever and for always” u will have my love
but “forever and for always” just isnt long enough
so keep it for eternity or for just another day
but no matter how long u want it my love is here to stay
so everytime i have to leave and give u one more kiss
think about the words ive said and please remember this
…as time goes on together i no our love will grow…
…by the way i never really told u, but “u had my love from hello”…
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i think that All ages can experience love, being in love when you're
a teenager is the worst, you don't really understand love properly and believe that
people love you when they say they do but are lying reallyeven though you may hav given your heart to them, it hurts all the more.
Hey i loved this peom it really is just lk what i feel lk with my boyfriend Cody
it was Wonderful and i hope you made it for a right reason
this poem is excellent and sum might think its boring but if you have dat special person in your life it's perfect!
that’s beautiful && cute
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whoever worte this should be famous!
Your good!!
that was a good ass poem. i really liked it a lot.
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i love your poem its perfect exspressing how you feel and i feel
just about the same and i do the same thing with abrievtating words im only 14
so that couldbe why but its perfect you should put your talent
into books and publish them so ……………………………
This was awesome!!
This poem is friggin good…..omg i love it!!
simply amazing!!
i really loved your poem it express the words that felt for this person.
THIS IS REALLLLLLY GOOD! I REALLY LIKE IT. ITS
DEEP AND HEART FLET, AND that’s THE KIND OF
POEMS I LIKE. KEEP ON WRITTING
hey,
I liked your poem a lot its so prety well got 2 go but realy your poem is amazing
OMG.. this poem is amazing
im so touched by it
i relate to it in so many ways
i just want you to know
that you should keep writting poems like this
for it makes me cry
not just of tears but of love and of pride
and if you writre poems like this
youll make others cry
and they will be touched to
such and i
they will understand more
not only of love but of a single tear of joy
Im a poet to .. not a very good one
for im am only 13
and still half way there
im learning very quickly
im never gonna give up
coz poetry is mah life
u r veeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyy talented on your writng pieces and i writ poems myself to maybe we should get together and write poems together i will type one for you thank you and write me back
OMG I LOVED THIS POEM SOO MUCH!!! IT WAS
INCREDIBLE!!!AND IM REALLY NOT INTO POEMS
BUT I LOVED YOURS…that’s HOW GOOD IT WAS
This is one of the best poems that I’ve ever read.
Keep up the good work on writing poems. I love those
poem writers.
i LOVE it!!!! i can totally relate 2 this poem too!!
this is a VERY good poem!! It had 2 be one of the
best poems I’ve ever read!!
That wuz the sweetest most preetyest poem I’ve ever
read I wish I had a love like that I don't even have a
boyfriend sucks I know but anyways that wuz awsome.
good man well done
i loved this poem its so good i liked it. it reminds me of my ex bf of a year and ten months. this is a poem that you'd want to use or say to give to him or her when you break up if you men broke up because i think it'll mean the wold to them if they heard how you really felt about them. i thought of something like that to my ex bf but then again he and i are not together anymore but that’s besides the point . other than that i reallly enjoyed your poem it was amazing i still think that everyone should use it when they're depressed and or just broke up with their gf and or bf because it really expresses your feelings in alot of ways thank you for your time and greatly love your poem email me and let me know what else you got in store for all of us you did and awsome job on this poem again
didn’t qiute lyke it but iis fine
that’s so good i love it! just beautiful!!!
o my jeeze! i absolutely love this poem! its so sweet .
and somthing i've always wanted to say to my boyfriend!
good job!
this made my heart melt! best poem I’ve ever read xx
this poem is straight to the heart and havent we
all felt this at some staghe in out lives
UM CORY iF i WAS YU i WOULD REALLY CARE
WAT DA man HAS TO SAY!!
CUZ LiKE EVERY GiRL SAYS men LiKE TO hurt US
BUT your POEM WAS SO FREAKiN AWESOME!!!
SO JUS KEEP UP your GOOD WORK
AND don’t WORRY ABOUT WAT THEY SAY
ahm hey.. can i borrow your poem? i'll make a song out of it…. so is it okay?
its me again…thank you
It’s a nice poem, but why is it that gals always put the blame on their nxt catch….somebody answer me pliz. I said all the nice things to her, read all the nice poems, talked on phone at night but she says she doesn’t want a relationship..she only wanna be friends…