Last night, we put on the cruise control
and switched on the autopilot
Travelled thru the night
just me and you
with the moon overhead
Caught by your stray bullet
I lost sight and direction
Caught by your stray bullet
I found a connection
We were in the presence of memories
flashing cameras
capturing moments
In a perfect world
there was no timeframe
In a perfect world
tomorrow wil have never come
Now i sit here today
empty room…. me and my pen
Digging myself deeper
my words are always free
Digging myself deeper
It’s so typical of me
Back at the start
Im pushing away
I hope you kept a place in memory
I will be here
but keeping hope is tough
I will be here
when will that be enough
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that’s deep
It's a pretty tight poem I like it
i really like your peom! i would love to hear more! i worte poems myself and i would love to share some! Amanda
I really like the way you write. Its really insparational.
you got good talent. I like to write but I find how you
write and the way you do it motivating. You must
Be really motivated. I only write when Im depressed
Or motivated. Well I like your Work
Wow Im in the same kind of perdicament
wow. that was beautiful! i wish i was able to write like that!
you right really good poetry!
hey i think these poems are really great and just
keep up the great work.
i love that poem! omg your a good writer. i wish i could help you. we r just the same
wow-that's deep, it's really good and nicely
written. i can tell you put alot of thought in to it.
keep writing. *Brandy*
What a good poem has you write !!But A Bad point is your……………………..Grammar mistake it should be : Travelled thru the night
just you and me with the moon overhead.But you wrote Travelled thru the night
just me and you
with the moon overhead.
maybe i was wrong cause you are a writer !!Ur granmmer must be exellent……….
When you write poems grammar is not the most important thing since writing poems is a very creative job (I didn't mean poor grammar though) There are other points the poet needs to balance other than grammar after initial creation. However the comment is appreciated I suppose. The poet will be more likely to take the comment as a positive advice by what I know about the poet. Long time no talk, Jones. Happy New Year!
Dang boi
you´ve got style
lovein that
Too deep! Im going through something that describes the situation perfectly. Would love to read more of your poems
i loved it that was a good poem great job