She is my friend
i have known her since year r
she shines like a star
she never lets go of pink
she is a wonderful thought to think
she is my best friend we will never let go
and we will always link.
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My best friend
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This poem is little, but very very beautiful and fantastic.
Really the way of words are very good.
It's very beautiful
i don't think this poem is as good as the others I’ve seen but its ok! good job!
hey this poem is good until the end you say “she is my best friend we will never let go and we will always link” hunny your trying to fit every think into that little line and you cannot always do that sometimes you can and it fits and sounds rite but hunny that don’t sound as well as the other but its good so hunny keep up the good work and keep trying!
That was a bad poem…Just to let you know!!!
LEARN HOW TO SPELL AND MAKE SENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dude That was really bad I mean atleast ask someone in your family
or something so you can see that its decent atleats to post up on a website.
You should find a new hobbie!! Who ever said you have a way with words??
Or a good mind for poetry?? If it was your mom I understand she doesn't
want to hurt you but, ask for the truth before you post it up i'll give you a 2/10
(for trying) Work Harder!! Much harder!! – Anonie Moose
HEY GIRL THIS IS THE NICEST POEM I EVER READ
BUT LEARN HOW TO SPELL !!!
i didn’t really like this poem it does not make sence to me….
man guess wat? Learn how to write poems See that’s way better than yours
and I made it up in like 5 seconds and by the looks
of your poem yours was done in 5 seconds also.
maybe you shoud take most of your time learnig good words…..!~!!
I really like your poem. I’ve won many awards for my writing and i think people that are dising this girl will have problems cause i think your writing will be amouse one day.
look “vanessa” if you want to post a message
write your surname or something next to it cause
i don’t want people thinking i wrote that comment.
btw you shouldnt give up on poetry just…….
ask for help next time kk
I’ve 2 questions. First, are you a girl or a boy, And second what were you thinking about writing a poem like this. I mean seriously when i read this poem i thought all you trying to do is rhyme words together. Girl, boy, whatever you are.. give UP!!! you STINK!
Reading this was like torture! I've known her since year R? Year R!?! What the heck is that supposed to mean!
I LoVe AlL ThE PoEmS ThErE So NiCe AnD InTrEsTiNG!!!!
All DON'T KNOW HOW TO MAKE SENSE YOU men HAVE TO GO TO RHYMING POEMS HORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!BYE
That was a wounderful poem.
dat was horrible
this is a greta poem so Im commenting on it