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The one I love

The one I love with all my might.
The one Im thinking of tonight.
The one that helps me make things right.
The one I long to kiss goodnight.
The one I dream of when i sleep at night.
The one I think of when I hug my pillow tight.
The one that makes me happy
when she comes into my sight.
The one Im not giving up
without putting up a fight.
– To “The One” that changed my life.

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24 Responses to “The one I love”

  1. Marilyn says:

    This poem is so cute!

  2. Brittany says:

    WOW!!! If only I could find a boyfriend that felt like that towards me I'd be all set. You're one is so lucky to have you and that was very sweet of you. I don't know many men that would get intouch with their feelings about a girl like that and I think more should! WHY CAN'T THERE BE MORE men LIKE YOU. You are a lucky dawg!! lols xoxo Brittany

  3. Raquel Gutierrez says:

    This is a really good poem.
    it takes a real man to do so .
    It brought tears to my eyes.
    keep it up.

  4. T.I says:

    I recently lost someone in my life that I loved with
    all of my heart. His death really is tairing me apart.
    Your poem made me smile for the first time in along
    time. Keep up it up because you have something
    there

  5. Dana says:

    that’s a really amazing poem, i love it!
    I believe it does take a real man to show his feelings!
    Keep up the good work!

  6. jenny says:

    i think it's about time you let go of this girl! your
    poems are amazing ana obviously
    come from the heart, but it seems to me that
    you are a little obsessed with someone who
    obviously wants nothing more to do with you in
    theat respect! move on with your life, and find
    someone who can and will appreciate the love you
    have to offer. don’t waste what time you could be
    mutually enjoying with someone else!

  7. Brigette says:

    this poem is great it gave me an idea for what i
    wanted to write thank you verry much

  8. Brigette says:

    the poem is great because the one i want is a really dood one and i sent it to my boyfriend

  9. sarahy says:

    hey noel well i love your poems a lot and you must like that girl a lot well you are also so cute and find you should find a girl that really does like you and i love that Spanish poem man i wish some body could love that much you are a great person and you should for get about her.and start a new life.okay

  10. kitty says:

    that was deep

  11. Double D the rapper says:

    Yo is it ok I use this for a song?

  12. ty says:

    wow!u must feel really special about sum1!

  13. ong feng yu says:

    Your poem is great .Your rhyming words r the best i had ever seen

  14. jordan says:

    i thought thay poem was relly good

  15. Skye says:

    This is a really great poem, it has alot of soul. I think Jenny should be quiet obviously some man has done something to hurt her and that's why she thinks what she thinks….. I think this is a great poem. I myself am a poet and I think this is really great work… Good Job Keep It Up Mate
    mwah xoxoxo

  16. Marlene says:

    that was such a sweet poem ….when I read it my
    mind went back to the one I love the most…Antonio!!!

  17. JONATHAN PLASCENCIA says:

    THIS POEM IS DEEP IT MADE ME THINK OF SOMEONE KEEP IT UP…..

  18. MARIANA says:

    please make a poem that rhymes ABOUT A
    GIRL AND A manAND THE manIS 15 AND
    THE GIRL ONLY 12.. SHE HAS MANY
    SIGNS HE LOVES HER BUT SHE does not
    BELIEVE IT BECUZ HE IS SO MUCH OLDER AND MANY PEOPLE AROUND
    HER RELATiveS AND CLOSE FRENDS
    HAV SAID HE LOVES U. BUT SHE STILL does not
    BELIEVE THAT AND SHE WANTS A SIGN THAT
    that’s REALLY RIGHT AND
    SHE CAN ACTUALLY BELIEVE THAT HE
    LOVER HER BAK..AND ITS NOT JUST
    A DREAM

  19. BARBiiE says:

    WOW…THiiS POEM TODALY DESCRiiBES
    THE WAY ii FEEL ABOUT MY __SOMEONE__
    RiiGHT NOW..WHO EVER YOU ARE
    WiiTH SHOULD BE ONE LUCKY LADDYY>>
    =)

    *BARBiiE*

  20. Ashlee says:

    This was the best poem i love it it makes me think
    of a mannamed “Joel”
    Hey i wanted to tell you that if you can please
    Right a poem about:
    A GIRL WHO LIKES THIS manAND THE manLIKES
    THE GIRL BUT THE GIRL IS TOO
    SHY TO TELL HIM WHAT SHE FEELS ABOUT HIM
    AND SHE DOESN'T KNOW WHAT TO TELL HIM.

    PS. e-mail me

  21. kylie says:

    Boring……to boring…..YAWN!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  22. Solis says:

    I wish i could meet you because I’ve read alot of your poems they are really beautiful!

  23. red says:

    par galing mo..

  24. Red says:

    par galing mo talaga! =>

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