Does your face still light up?
Do you still begin to laugh
when you watch the video
and look at the photograph?
Of that night when we danced
like there was no rest
That night I forgot what its like
to be second best
Does your body still fill with butterflies?
Do your eyes still begin to wet
when you remember that night
when we first met?
Well, today you flew back
to your home and to your guy
But I will have no regrets
when I look to that sky
Time cheated us once again
we knew this day would suck
But Im not saying “goodbye”
…Im wishing you luck
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you are one awesomely poetic, talented, gifted,
wise kid(not nessessarily yong, i just kal ppl that …
evn if theyr older than me lol) and you are so loved
you may kno it or not but you are
by the angels n heavens above
by the Lord of Lords and
many in your family
ur frends and aquaintences
you are sooo loved
more than you could know
and that’s awesome
i get this deep
lonely, yet optimistic vibe frum you
its good
thankz
uv earnd yourself …
uh…
sumthin really good lol
i dunno up 2 you i guess
lol
liv your life to the fullest
cuz you desirve it
and then eternitly in the wonderful bliss of the heavens
they're waiting for you…
Amazing. Simply amazing. Im really starting to love your poems. They are just so… I don't know, they remind me of me. They're really my type.
ITS A VERYNICE POEM WITH A GREAT SENSE:
OH MY GOD I JUST LOVO YOUR POEM I JUST LOVED IT ITS 1 OF THE best poems I’ve READ KEEP IT UP I MEAN IT 4EVER JACKY
daaaaaang that’s good. same things ahppening to me! isnt life funny
All I have to say about this poem is that OMG! is my life and my girlfriend's life, it perfectly fit in our situation.
one of the better poems I’ve read.. A lot of the others on here tend to sound very gay. The one's that just desperately seek to find something to rhyme with a word.. poetry is about MEANING !!
you have an amazing talent.. that was a beautiful poem.. i thought it was very touching…
thes are good poems