I cannot take this no more
The lies the pain the thought of myself
I just want to hide deep inside myself where nobody will look
All the fairy tale say once upon time~
Deep down inside there I was confused
Never want to come out
Inside my wall I put up years ago and no one noticed I escaped
No one gets me
they say im still here but how can they no when all they sees my body never inside my soul
Nothings wrong~ if you don’t ask
I may look happy during the day but I cry myself to sleep at night
No one knows no one cares
My bodys still here but I ran off a long time ago with my soul and my heart
Please just look and you will see what’s left of me
Look deep into my eyes past the hope that I once had past the hurt
and look deep deep inside and you will see I left, because what was once inside is empty
Can’t you see??
I escaped.
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This is a very deep and soulful poem and i know what it feels like to escape.. i feel you nicole
Wow very moving made me cry i know how you feel.
Hey Nicole whoever you are i like your poem cuz it relates to
me and i believe almost all
of us have been where you are now or where you were!
A few weeks ago i was ready to give up
when my good friend stepped in and realised
something was wrong! She told me to get rid of
everything bad or anything that makes you angry
in your life. So I did and now im so much happier!
Try to start focusing on the lil things in life or maybe
in your case whatever its maybe you need to focus away from the small things and start thinking larger!
Whatever its it'll pass! Don’t give up hope it’s the only thing you need!
hey i kno how you fill iwent though the same thing,i always thought no 1 kared and
they did but if you ever need to talk im here even if i don’t kno you .sometime
its good to talk to people who has been though it,all
im sayin is I’ve been down the same road as you and still in it and i kno how
u feel so if you need a friend im here well i g2g goodbye
love danielle
WOW!! This is how I feel sometimes, actually right
now. thank you for this poem
very Deep…but cool
this is definitely one of the best poems that i've read on this site you seem to be a very deep person and it seems like you're going through some really hard times. believe me i know how that’s…but it's important 2 not put up a shield that blocks you from this world…even though it seems kind of sucky right now, someday hopefully, it'll get ten times better.
hey nicole, i don’t know you but the poem you wrote is really deep…
i know how it feels to be like that coz my soul escaped too!! and tell
me I’ve been living my life a hell… yeah, the poem really suites me!
i think this poem is amazing and you need to continue expressing your feelings..the best poems come from all the hurt and pain that everyone has to keep inside..and i love reading how other people are feeling
I absolutely love this poem, I can relate…i think its one of the most beautiful pieces iv ever read
*I really liked this poem! Its really amazing!
that poem was very good keep up the good work
this was a very touching poem…..it made me cry a little
Id like to call bs on this poem. This is Escape bu lydia simpson….
BEAUTIFUL POEM. i feel that way too….
Hey whts u, i relly liked these poem alot, i feel the same, but everyday i fell worser and worser
i like the part were you say that you cry youre self at night, every night that’s wht I do to, I was
just reading all the comments and they all say that they feel the same, but I think they just say that
just 4 the heck of it but no one knows how you n me feel even though I don’t know u.
always
B@byGirl
Iknow how it feels to escape and have nobody notice or care,
but it's a very moving poem. I like it alot. thank you for sharing it
with the rest of us.
it's funny i wrote a poem with the same words