Nathan J. Funnell:

A wonderfully written poem! Truely amazing and insightful!

ANTHONY GERGELY:

THIS POEM APPEARS TO BE WRITTEN BASED ON NEED, NOT LOVE. wANTING FOR SOMEONE WHAT YOU WANT FOR THEM IS JUST LOVING YOURSELF THROUGH THEM. iF YOU WANT FOR THEM WHAT THEY WANT FOR THEM, THEN, THE POSSIBILITY OF LOVE EXISTS. iT A SLONG BEEN A PERSONAL BELIEF THAT WHATEVER YTO DESIRE FOR YOURSELF, YOU MUST FIRST MAKE IT POSSIBLE IN THE LIVES OF OTHERS. THIS POEM IS TOO NEGATIVELY SELF CENTERED.

Peter Eveland:

Irrespective of any comments placed in the past
or in the future,
Im compelled to say that such a poem,
and such an immense expression
can hardly anything truly put into its' own league
of absolute and total fulfillment when words can say
and mean all that they were meant to say
and mean!
I therefore, must conclude that this small but
miraculous interlude on "love washing the soul"
is all I could have imagined the beauty of words
to say and then a glipse of hope as words
transform themselves into thoughts, emotions
passion, and ultimately a complete and
total consuming effect intimacy that only one's
soul can know truly and inevitably exists!

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