Vanessa:

Hey you got a cool poem.
is it true?
im trying to make poems that are about real life.
I've made 2 so far but having a little trouble.
could you help?
it does not have 2 ryme.
thank you.
Vanessa

Leslie.H.:

hey! that's a good poem its true when you whant him to like you as much as you like him but he wont let you know.I can relate to your poem and i know how you feel

Leslie.H.:

hey! that's a good poem its true when you whant him to like you as much as you like him but he wont let you know.I can relate to your poem and i know how you feel

amanda:

i can relate to this poem so i think it's nice....

sophie n:

i feel the same way!!!

jamie:

i really liked it even though im 13

MM:

did you write this poem?

Bianca:

OMG ...this is a very nice but touching poem i loved it !

Nini:

hey i realy like your poem i realy fell the same way
of tell the person that you like .and what you
said its very true!.

sally :

omg how sad i feel the same way
i guess you really like the man well laterz

iris:

eilow..
nice poem...
but i think you lack the touch of putting the poem be realized as its...
as in be more emotional...
for the reader to feel it the way you feel it tooo...

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