The Gift of Love

The Gift of Love
5 (100%) 1 vote

Today is Christmas
and all over the World
children eagerly search under the tree
to see what special gift Santa left them
Your gift to me won’t be wrapped and placed under the tree
It will never be a disappointment
and never go out of style
It cannot be exchanged
and I will never be tired of it
Your gift brings a tear to my eye
and a smile to my lips
It makes my heart skip a beat
whenever I think you cared enough to give it to me
This Christmas I received something very precious to me
More precious than all the money
and all the gold in the world
This Christmas you gave me the greatest gift of all
the Gift of Love





32 thoughts on “The Gift of Love”

  1. please if you het this tell me ok. That’s all I want to know. When people say that it makes them cry its not because it makes them think of their loved ones

  2. It was a good poem could have used more of a ryme scheme,But the poem made sense that’s what made it a Good poem.
    It would be good for chilidren and adults to read because its very understandable and simple but not that simple.

  3. I thought it was relly good and you should keep
    writing them
    and juan is speeking a load of rubbish, i thought it was relly good and that you shoud keep writing them, juanis speeking rubbish and
    i would like to see her write better 7 out of 10

  4. this poem made me think of Matt cuz hes the
    only thing that this christmas is worth this poem
    say's it all i think of it now and then!!!this year he
    as made my chirstmas the greatest evere by given
    me his love i love you Matthew and this poem is
    great

  5. Very nice sentiment in this “short story” for, that’s what its. It has no rhyme or form recognizeable as poetry. Keep writing, though, it will come to you.

  6. I would like to say that I think who ever wrote this peom knows that love is the best thing that could have ever happened to anyone and I think that this peom was probably one of the only one's I can actually say that I relate to so thank you I thought the peom was outstanding

  7. i've been searching for friendship poem and i found this is the coolest one…thank you for the poem….it was really interesting and cute…hope i would find this kind of poem again…..bye..

  8. so bad and boring pls changed and create something different and interesting maybe funny or joy type pls….im open pls don’t mistake me

  9. HEY I LIKE THE POEM AND I THINK YOU SHOULD KEEP RIGHTING AND don’t LISEN TO ALL THE PEOPLE that’s SAYING BAD THINGS ABOUT YOUR POEM. I THINK YOU SHOULD KEEP WRITNG THESE POEMS.

  10. wow i'm so glad that someone has written a good
    poem on christmas thank you so much for writeing
    this i givve it five stars!!!!!!!!!

  11. that was one of the best poems i read Im gonna share this poem with my family and friends. Think you for leting evry one in the world read this poem and to share.

  12. this poem is so good. it made me cry. don't even listen to what that juan man says because i don't even think he can write a poem. he is just jealous. ne wys keep on writing and Im sure you will have a bright future in writing poems.

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