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Tangled Without Release

Tangled Without Release
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Why these dark days never end,

Why the sky is that colour of blue..

Why I write but can’t press send..

Why I can’t forget about you..

These are questions that haunt me..

Ones that I must know the answers too!

There’s so much in this world that we don’t see..

And so many things that we just don’t do!

It is these things that draw my attention..

I can’t erase things out of my mind.

There are too many memories to mention..

Too many happy places left to find!

There is nothing I can forget,

You may be happy to know..

But one day I will repay my debt,

And pay you back for blows so low!

I’m so lonely without you near..

I just can’t shake this feeling!

I wish you’d just come back here..

I’d resort to kneeling!

This is how I feel for you,

Emotions so tangled..

The things I feel are far too true

I can’t breathe, I’m strangled..

Why can’t these feelings go away?

Why can’t I just forget?

Why must here be where I lay?

I’m caught, like a net..

You decided friendship would work for us,

But I wish for more..

But I refuse to make a fuss,

I fear you’ll close the door..

I’m Tangled Without Release.

I can’t escape this, ever.

I want my emotion to cease!

I want my ties to sever.

Let me free, let me be,

Let me live my life!

Let me breathe, let me see.

Leave me without strife!





10 thoughts on “Tangled Without Release”

  1. If you cannot forget, then just take it and remember all the happiness and beauty as possible. They’re beautiful memories.

    Do you know that life is experiences and memories. We’re fulfilled when the memories are beautiful and I think the beauty of the memories is determined by the owner.

    If you’re kind you’ll see things beautifully. You’ll see others have no evil intentions and you’ll be happy. Happy people are not those who never experienced hardship but those who’re content.

  2. I love this poem! I’ve decided that I will comment and read everyone of your poems because they’re so good. This poem is truly beautiful! Keep writing! Serious-leh!

  3. It’s so sweet how everything just flow and life is just too hard to deal. But remembering of what you did with him can be hard to forget once you fell in love…

  4. im happy that you wrote this poem and i am even more happy about the fact that i got the chance to read this.you are a good writer and you should keep on expressing your feelings through your poetry.it is hard to forget and remembering the good things makes it even harder to move on,but at least you and this person still are friends be happy about that because if you do not have that even and you dont know where he is then it is torture beyond means.great work

  5. well i can understand what you are going through.I am sorry for that.I also had this guy in my life and we were together for 2 years,we loved each other too much but there was a twist in the fairy tale.we had to part because of our fam and friends.we had no real choice.well its been 7months now since we saw each other or spoke because i don’t know where he is nor does he know where i am and we don’t have any contact details of each other as the people who took us apart has changed our numbers and adresess I still feel the same way about him and hope he still feels it too but there is nothing that can be done about it.ii have been depressed and down since then and I gained weight I am basically not living my life anymore.Well the reason I am telling you this is because I want you to know that you are not alone and that I really do understand.I hope things get better for you.And that you can get through this and not get stuck in this sadness because it really is not nice to be in a hole of darkness.

    Anyway I wish you the best!

  6. very nicely written. I like how you talk about how much this person means to you, and how sad you feel without them. It is a very nice poem and I hope you are able to find someone who is worthy of your love

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