Your love gave me my first breath

Your love gave me my first breath
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I look at the pictures of when I was happy
Before I ever knew of the things that you could do
Your love gave me life,
Like my first breath
You picked me up
Took away my pain
Then you must’ve had your share of me and left
I fell and no one catched me
Im dying, bleeding
Thinking of what we could’ve had
There’s nothing left to do
I let you inside my soul
You crushed till nothing was left
You gave me my first breath
And you took my last





41 thoughts on “Your love gave me my first breath”

  1. I was reading your poem and it was amazing, Im a 32 yr old woman
    gonna such a tough time right now and do not even want to live anymore, so I’ve a question, is this poem about a situation you have gone threw
    and if so how did you do it? Please help!!

  2. I think that it's a very beautiful poem…….The reason why i'm saying this is because, same thing happened to me, and now all memories came back……..I just can't get over this realtionship………Great Poem Brava!

  3. this poem is just great i enjoyed reading it, it was just great it was good and many people cannot write the wat that you wrote this poems its wjust wonderful. Anways that’s all i could say and hopefully you will write more poems like this it will be fun reading them…….

  4. WOW YOUR POEM IS AMAZING I WENT THROUGH THE SAMA THING AND I'M STILL TRYING TO GET OVER IT. IT TOOK OVER 9MTHS FOR THINGS TO START TO BRIGHTEN UP BUT THEY DO.

  5. hey i really liked this poem it really mad me cry
    it really means something to me when
    someone else writes the same feelings down on
    paper or on the computer
    thank you

  6. OMG this a really good poem when did you ever think
    to write this girl you
    should start your own web page because that’s how
    i really feel and i think other girls do to

  7. a heartfelt poem… i can relate… :( this is what Im going through… :( (and i am like this til the day i die)
    a very touching…beautiful sentiments! iloveit…

  8. I really like your style, the way you write your poems. And for this poem I have to say I thought it was Deep!! The ending is what got to me.
    I look forward to reading any new material that you might have:)

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