I look at the pictures of when I was happy
Before I ever knew of the things that you could do
Your love gave me life,
Like my first breath
You picked me up
Took away my pain
Then you must’ve had your share of me and left
I fell and no one catched me
Im dying, bleeding
Thinking of what we could’ve had
There’s nothing left to do
I let you inside my soul
You crushed till nothing was left
You gave me my first breath
And you took my last
Your love gave me my first breath
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i love that poem
Great job….I liked this one alot…
This poem is ok. You could definitely improve it.
hey that was a really good poem.
This poem was very well written. The emotion you conveyed in this writing was touching. Good job!
i loved your poem it really spoke to me, told me something, I can really relate
i loved your poem it really spoke to me, told me something, I can really relate
ghey
I was reading your poem and it was amazing, Im a 32 yr old woman
gonna such a tough time right now and do not even want to live anymore, so I’ve a question, is this poem about a situation you have gone threw
and if so how did you do it? Please help!!
The poem was very touching that’s why I loved the poem so much.
I can relate to this poem alot.
Your a really good writter.
your poem is so true that just happened to me a few days ago!!!
nicole,
i love this poem it brings tears to my eyes.
i read your poem and i cried…. i see that i'm going through the exact same thing ….
its an awesome poem i really really like it
Its good to know that i'm not the only one that feels like that in this world!! Good Job!
I think that it's a very beautiful poem…….The reason why i'm saying this is because, same thing happened to me, and now all memories came back……..I just can't get over this realtionship………Great Poem Brava!
this poem is just great i enjoyed reading it, it was just great it was good and many people cannot write the wat that you wrote this poems its wjust wonderful. Anways that’s all i could say and hopefully you will write more poems like this it will be fun reading them…….
your poem was amazing i went through the exact same thing just a little bit ago it really touched me great job!
I haven’t read it yet but 4rm all these comments, it makes me want 2
THIS POEM WAS VERY TOUCHIN AND LIKED IT VER MUCH CAUSE IT RELATES TO
TO ME AND HOW I FEEL (AWSOME POEM)
i really like this poem it describes alot about me….
i think this poem is very excellent and you are very good at writing poems.
WOW YOUR POEM IS AMAZING I WENT THROUGH THE SAMA THING AND I'M STILL TRYING TO GET OVER IT. IT TOOK OVER 9MTHS FOR THINGS TO START TO BRIGHTEN UP BUT THEY DO.
i love your poem it really hepled me out through my hard times
hi i saw your pome and i love it. its how i fell whan my Gf brock up with me…..
hello i loved your poem you doint know me but i was just looking though some webs sites and i came across your poem and i loved it
Wow this poem is exactly what Im going thru… It was really good!!!!!
hey i really liked this poem it really mad me cry
it really means something to me when
someone else writes the same feelings down on
paper or on the computer
thank you
This poem is so heart touching, but so sad at the same time,
but I stilll LOVE this poem. IT'S AWSOME!!!
hi it was a veri good poem
i read it it 5 time
i enjoy it thank
I LOVE THIS POEM SO MUCH
very good hope itsnt based on true events
this is a really nicepoem i can really relate to it!!!!
loveee it!!
OMG this a really good poem when did you ever think
to write this girl you
should start your own web page because that’s how
i really feel and i think other girls do to
I love that poem because at a nice poem for lost love on and i hope they can see what i see about at
I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM
a heartfelt poem… i can relate… :( this is what Im going through… :( (and i am like this til the day i die)
a very touching…beautiful sentiments! iloveit…
I love this poem. You can feel what the author felt when she wrote this.
that’s a quality you look for when reading poems….
i love this poem …
its so beautiful …
I really like your style, the way you write your poems. And for this poem I have to say I thought it was Deep!! The ending is what got to me.
I look forward to reading any new material that you might have:)