Good-bye

Good-bye
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Hanging there dying,
On the inside Im crying.
My life is leaving,
My heart is bleeding.
Now it’s the end,
So much for friends.
I looked up at the sky,
One last time.
And whispered,
Good-Bye.





20 thoughts on “Good-bye”

  1. This is a beautiful poem and i wish I could
    find more like it thank you for posting it. If you
    have any more please post them or mail
    them to me. I hope you are not writing about
    yourself because I know what those kinds of
    thoughts are like and it hurts so bad just to go on
    but the way I found to keep on going is to
    hep other people. It just makes the pain
    go away for a while and it allow s you to feel good
    about yourself for a while.
    thank you again
    Brian

  2. Fabulous poetry, really emotive. Many share and have shared the feeling but
    this poem says it all so succinctly and so sweet ly -well done. :o) …………brings to mind an old limerick I once heard:

    'Tis hard to be human it's true,
    for most such thoughts are not new,
    but if in our despair
    we unload what we bear
    the powerful becomes what is you

  3. hey girl i hav a poem 4 you….
    i RARELY write optimistic poems
    this is one of my few
    so i hope it bebefits you……:

    ~Anthem of MY Dieing Day~
    On the mossy grass of green
    sitting in the shadows alone
    The smell of Jasmine’s keen
    such peace shall never be overthrown
    Why!? Cries the wind through the trees
    Whoosh through my hair goes the breeze
    Up and around masses of hills
    suddenly it comes to a stop
    and the rest of the day stands still
    I look and see the sun is blocked
    then a moment became
    of just me and the bird
    Now the glowing magma of sun
    is leaving me
    to shine his mighty light on another lonely one
    The darkness creeping in at last
    my life is now just one big past
    Six feet down
    I’m gonna go
    But not just yet
    for the stars now show
    I see my life with no regret
    for I kept on living in times of fret
    I kept on growing
    though so many opposing
    I kept on dreaming
    throughout all the unbelieving
    Helped all those I could help
    Unto the King himself I knelt
    Some nights troubled that I won’t forget
    when sleep I couldn’t get
    and all night to the pillow wept
    All the secrets, troubles, and lies I kept
    then the promise of tomorrow soon left
    But gladly that season came and went
    The thought to take away the truth
    came as such a potent tempt
    But I went on
    bold and strong
    until today
    the day I recall it all
    remember the days
    that I was so glad I kept on going
    and on the days I thought of it again
    I would live the days
    that made my life worth living
    and the faith would come back
    So I went on giving and giving
    Lived my life strong winning and winning
    Until today where my life stops continuing
    But it was all worth it from the beginning
    The end is near
    But I made a difference
    I’ve no fear
    For you I pray deliverance
    I’m on last gear
    All my dreams have come true
    The end is here
    I love you.
    KXZ(KAR)

  4. hey ….. this poem is great . I understnad what
    you are saying…. continue to write you
    have a gift…. good luck and i hope you
    find endless love
    signed
    candice

  5. hey i loved that poem because I wrote
    my man salud one kind of like that
    he told me not to think like that because
    he loved me we have 1year together
    and his planing a family his crazy but hothis my only love
    well e-mail me so we can make r poems together.

  6. The poem sounds nice and lovely.I like to hear more from
    the author.When I read the poem,I’ve half feeling.
    I’ve sad feelings and happy feelings because of the poem.I
    It sounds great…keep up the good work.

  7. there is only 1 word that comes to mind when describing this poem “beautifull” if you are writing this
    about your self well i no what kind of pain you are in because Im in the same right at this moment
    “beautifull”

  8. THIS POEM WAS SO DEEP AND INTENSE. YOUR A REALLY GREAT POET AND I HOPE THAT A LOT MORE PEOPLE GET TO HEAR THEIS POEM BECAUSE IT REALLY MAKES YOU THINK ABOUT THE LAST WORDS YOU SAY TO SOME BODY thank you IT MAKE ME VALUE THE THINGS I’ve A LOT MORE!
    LOVE IT TONS!!:)

  9. i love these poems the ppl that have wrote them sure do have lots in common w me so if you like hit me up so we could talk goodbye love pumpkin

  10. hey this poem is great i can realate to it because i feel like that all the time it SUCKS but always think twice
    love alwas alyssa Kimball

  11. hi…in all your poems it seems that your hurting..i want
    to tell you that it's not the end of the world if something
    wrong happens..think of it this way..it hurts but what
    do i compare this pain for…there's people out there that
    need to be crying but they aren't and basically not
    thinking of dying…give your carries to God…let him
    be your shelter open your heart to him and see this
    heaviness leave from your heart…he die for us..being
    sinners and didn't cry over why me…but instead he
    die gladly for us because he loves us…stop thinking
    so negative..be glad this things happen because
    they happen for a reason..n for better

  12. Tie A Knot
    Hang On

    by Ron Tranmer

    Life can bring great challenges,
    disappointment and despair.
    At times we want to just give up,
    from pressures hard to bear.

    Life on earth can be beautiful.
    We must never give up hope.
    Tie a knot, and hang on for dear life,
    when you’re at the end of your rope.

    The rope represents our earth life,
    whether happy, sad, or fraught.
    Our Savior’s great atoning love,
    represents the saving knot.

    If we will but have faith in Him
    when our rope is at it’s end,
    He’ll be the knot that stops our fall,
    and helps our lives to mend..

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