Goodbye "love"

Goodbye "love"
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Sitting inside my room thinking of you
tossing and turning, don’t know what to do
how could i miss you, someone i hardly know
this feeling’s so weird, but it’s starting to grow

i know for sure Im in control
but when i think of you, i start to fall
i know i should stop, but i don’t know how
so Im writing this poem to release it all somehow

love is a game, a game i could never win
it cuts like a knife, it pricks like a pin
i know if i’d love you, i’d soon feel the pain
you’re so far away and I will be waiting in vain

i started this poem feeling so blue
Im ending it now with words that’s so true
goodbye “love” maybe I will see you someday
‘coz if we’re meant to be “love will find a way”





23 thoughts on “Goodbye "love"”

  1. wow.. i like the poem >.- its like how feel…
    “how could I miss you ,
    someone I hardly know
    this feeling's so weird”

    pls write more

  2. girl i know EXACTLY how you feel!!
    but sadly im not as optimistic most of the time
    good luk grl
    hope yall bump into eachutha one day
    and he'll gaze into your eyez
    as he apologizes and helps you pik up ir stuff
    and he'll see somthing he's never seen
    nights'lll go by
    wem he cannot stop thinking of you
    and he wont evn kno why
    and then hell find you somday
    and wen he does hell keep you close
    4ever will he hold you
    and never go away

  3. Hi, im writing to you to tell you thank you…this was the perfect answere to my problem… I needed to say goodbye to somone I love and this poem made it that much easier.

  4. girl..that was so touching…..and 4 some reason i know exactly how you feel….keep writing and inspiring others like me…thank you…

  5. W4DUP TH0SE LINES ARE FIRM3 KEEP DR0PIN THEM … AND KEEP IN MIND D0NT KRY 0VA ANY V4T0 DAT W0ULDNT 0V4 you … 3s4.LoOn3y … PUTIN IT DOWN 4 DAT TRECE Y QU3 TE PARECE … S0UTHSIDE A' C-TOWN …

  6. when your writing a poem make sure that you don’t
    tell the readers that it`s happening to you. it seemed
    as though you wrote the poem as the situation was
    happening and that’s the worst thing you could do when
    it comes to being a poet. any way i really did like it but
    just remember what i said for next time k

  7. Hey… that was such a touching poem and i sure so
    many others feel what you were sayin. I know i did,
    Its so complicated but this poem seriously helped,
    thank for taking the time to give people some hope
    with such a annoying issue. Keep up the super greeat
    work!!!!! thank you again and God Bless!!!!…. oh yeah I
    hope things work out or if not life gives us several
    obsticals to tackle… im sure your strong enough to
    take on this obstical….TAKE CARE SWEETIE!!!!!!!!

  8. Hey,
    I would like to thank you for writing such a pretty peom I know what your going through.I feel the same way and it hard to find poems like yours.If you have only other poem send them please.

  9. girl don’t worrie about what vannessa……..or who ever that was who tried to change your style of writing ^^^
    girl do what you do. i feel people like you, you speak from your heart and not from you as$ like some people we know (wink wink)
    but girl stay strong and keep your head up ma'. 1

  10. hey girl well i really liked your poem you gotts sum talent. you know your poem made my realize sumthing if its really “lubb” then it will find its way rite? well that's pretty much it jst don't stop writting and when you do make sure it cums 4rom el CoRaZon…..

  11. Hey i like the poem alot!!!i can really relate 2 it!!!it sounds like your writing it from personal experience!!r u??well i liked it plz…write back!!

  12. I like this poem alot and I know how she feels cause
    sometimes I feel the same way when I'm in love wit
    someone I really like.When your deeply in a relationship
    your going 2 fall in love wit that person causeyou can trust
    them and basicly your just in love

    -Xavier-
    AKA Lovable_Boi

  13. I JUST WANTED TO SAY THAT THIS POEM IS ONE OF THE BEST I'VE READ IN MY LIFE. I'VE FIND that’s JUST MORE THAN WORDS ON A PIECE OF PAPER BUT IS YOUR HEART IN A BOX. thank you TO THE ARTHOR FOR HELPING ME FIND WORDS TO MY FEELINGS. thank you.

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