I’m hiding beneath your fingernail
I’m just another grain of sand
Let me join the countless others
And please, rinse your hand
I share a goodbye
With a friend whose fate I see in me
He’s a drop of rain already falling
And will shortly join the sea
Really nice. Not many people get the meaning of being in another person or things place and speaking through poetry of their feelings, but I know exactly how its.
i love sad poems and I like yours
do you think you can make
one of me and my man salud
if you can please mail me thank you
-bye-
Jones, I would like to first say your poems shows
shows good expression on your topic. yet the
understanding of what your really tring to express
is not put in a more understanding way. we want
to feel what your tring to say.
your poem is really ( 100x) nice and always rhymes
but can you make a poem for a two friend that will
already be part to one another when at this time
they are already both angry to each other but
before they are best friends? please….
I had just lost a close friend of mine, he commited suicide.
And the last two verses made me realise, that he is
still around me.
Even though I can't see him.
To the author of this poem.
thank you.
you have strong feelings and i think its good you keep it open in to poems so you should keep it up cuz i love reading them thank you and Im a poem writer my self and you inspire me to write more and more
good luck in lfe goodbye *
sad but nice i like all your poems