He does but not you

He does but not you
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He makes me,
He shakes me,
He breaks me down,
But you will always seem to care.
He knows me,
He shows me,
He throws me away,
But you will always be there.
He braces me,
He chases me,
He erases me.
But not you.





10 thoughts on “He does but not you”

  1. hey look this poem is good but add more to it because anyone could of made this up.
    my 4 years old sister writes better poems then you dosorryto say but its true.
    your friend Alicia

  2. i love thet pome i remeber about this manthat i love and he love me it wear our first kiss i love it that right there i 4 in love with him.

  3. yo shawty your poem is not dat bad … i kind of feel bout dis girl rite now…but try expand on your thoughts and be more creative on in your poem.. iight holla baby

  4. This is a good poem but its kinda childish if you think about it.
    Some advise, stop trying to talk like a nigger and spell your words right!!!!!!!

  5. THIS IS A GREAT POEM! I WAS LOOKING FOR POEMS CAUSE I COLLECT THEM AND I HAVE ABOUT 600 OF THEM I KNOW ITS WEIRD BUT YEAH! MY NAME ISNT REALLY PUMKIN ITS ZENAIDA BUT THEY CALL ME PUMKIN goodbye

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