It hurt so very bad,
No one sees that Im sad,
I long for arms to hold me,
Is it too hard to see?
I need you here today,
But that will never be,
At least I can think back on the days,
When you belonged to me.
You think that you’re so funny,
Wait til the cold hands grab your throat,
you start to choke,
you will not cope,
you will be buried in the lies you have told.
I cannot believe you,
What you did was so wrong,
But i still love you,
And i will forever long.
This is an awesome poem and it relates so much to me
good luck on your poems amy and don’t lose your talent
because obviously you have a lot!!!!!
I really like this poem it happened to me i date a man for almost 4 years and i got played but i still love him
I just found out from my now ex boyfriend
that he cheated on me for almost the whole time
that we have been going out…
and i still love him with all my heart,
even tho he did cheat on me…and a lot of ppl
say that im stupid cause i still love him
but you have to be in my shoes to understand
My comment is that I thought this poem actually
made me realize that i could forgive my boyfriend
from hiding stuff from me and that I could trust him
again so in a way this poem helped me with the
problems in my relationship!!!!!!!!
this poem is good n really sad.
if your tryin 2 make me cry, you've succeeded. lol
Hey! i totally kno where your comming from. my ex*boyfriend
cheated on me to. i was so hurt:( But the more sadder
thing is that i still love him and no matter how hard i try i can't
stop loving him. so i kno exatly how you feel. Keep up the great work!!
ur realli good at it:)
*sad 14 y.o
im crying right now…my old boyfriend did the same!!! waaahh!!!
i went through what you are going through and i can feel your pain but it will get better
it really means something to me
I love this poem and i said this to my girl friend
yeah your ryt..i already experienced that:(
i hate what he did..but i still love him:(
The feelings and emotions behind this poem…..it
touches me. I can feel the pain. This is one of my
favorites….
Your poem says it all, and that\’s an excellent quality in poetry!! I am so sorry you are hurting!!
I just want you to know that you have a talent, and I look forward to reading another one of your poems:)
Hang in there=)
its a nice poem