Some friendships gonna end

Some friendships gonna end
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My life is like a movie
I wanna take it
and rewind it
and forget about what’s behind it
Sometimes I sit and wonder who designed it
Who took a movie and my life and combined it
Some people’s life is a peace of mind
but not mine
It’s so intertwined
with people that don’t understand
just strictly demand
Then they got the nerve to wanna be your friend
but you’re ready to make a stand
On the other hand you wanna fit in
So you raise your chin
and give em a grin
Now you call em your friend
but sooner or later the friendships gonna end





40 thoughts on “Some friendships gonna end”

  1. i think this poems is very good and interesting it had a great rymth stlyle. Well its 1 of the best poems I’ve ever read.

  2. WOW you have no idea how true this poem is for me! I just got out of a friendship that I thought would never end but come to find out she was bad mouthing me and I asked her about it and she just said that she never said that but i knew that she was lying to me b/c i read w/ my own eyes! I was so upset and now she won't talk to me about it b/c she doesn't want to fight about it and its sad! That’s what I had to say hope you liked it! It was a great poem!

  3. i just want to give props to Lameese Carmenar because that poem is so true. sometimes i just think that there is no such thing as a true friendship .

  4. To be honest, I don't really like this poem. It's so negative and so dull.
    There's a good source of words you wrote that fit in with this poem, but the way
    you said that friendships always end is what I don't get.
    I'm a poet myself and I'll admit, I've written some negetive stuff, but stuff like saying
    friendships always end is not that apatizing. And not inspiring for viewers to read.

  5. Hi Author…..
    don’t write a poem that can discourage people or
    it can create a negative idea into a person… please
    write a happy poem… but your poem is a nice one..

    keep up….

  6. i agree wid 'sarah” and 'helixe” dat it shud inspire d readers…
    buh yeh you wanted to xpress your feelings and datz wat you cud think about.
    writing a perfect poem includes putting up d rite feelings and thoughts..
    m sure you wud get wat i mean :)
    u have written a ralli nyce poem, i loveed it ^_^
    keep it up !!
    and dun forget to be correct in yoh lyf!

  7. YOU KNOW I PERSONNALY BELEive EVERY WORD IN THIS PATICULAR POEM, YOU THINK YOU CAN T RUST A FRIEND WHEN IN REALITY THERE ALL RATTLESNAKE, TURN AROUND AND BITE YOU..

  8. this poem relates to me in so many ways its not even funny its such a good poem and its true what the poem says so the person who wrote it you did a good job writing it

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