When we were together

When we were together
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When we were together
My life had meaning.
Now that we’re apart
I have nothing to live for.

When we were together
I felt like I could do anything
Now that we’re apart
Im no longer sure.

When we were together
My life was at its peak.
Now that wer’e apart
My heart feels so weak.

When we were together
I had many things to say.
Now that we’re apart
I can no longer speak.





14 thoughts on “When we were together”

  1. You,re such a talented writer i really would say that of all your
    poems the one that i identify more to is this one a person that iloved for along
    time left my side there was so much pain in my heart i still talk to him but he is very distant now and it will
    no longer be the same i hope if this is your story in the poem that you find all the happiness you wish for
    keep writing i think you will one day become a great writer

  2. I REALLY LOVE THIS POEM IT REALLZ TOUCHES MY HEART AND SOUL IT REMINDS ME OF THE FATHER OF MY KIDZ KEEP ON WRITING GREAT POEMS LIKE THIS

  3. this poem is very deep and meaningful and it can really make you think about how strong and empowering some things are on a person and I like it for those reasons.

  4. your poem was good.i could really relate to it because i
    lost my relative that waz the closest to me.and I still hurt to this day.
    and the cops killed him 4 years ago this july.he was more of a father figure than my real dad.
    it hurt but I will live I gess. goodbye

  5. Hey Noel this poem is so true.This has happend to a lot of people.Almost all of your poems relete to me.Kepp it up you r a good writer.Kepp writting and if stupid people tell you that you suck no les creas porque tus poemas son preciosos.

  6. yeah i know how that feels you got skills and all you haters
    hateing on it yall should be just like him that’s a real
    man none like u!!!!!

  7. oh my god this is very good i wish there were more men out there that can speak their feelings just like you can this is really good keep it up an if you havent found the right girl don’t worry with your words youll find her through the world

  8. This Is A Great Poem Almost MAde Me Cry Thinkin Bout It Afta I Read It Because I Just Got Out Of A Relationship Today And I WAs In Love Wit Him And It hurts Like Hell….Keep Writin

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