I remember my boyfriend's death and his smile

I remember my boyfriend's death and his smile
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One day, me
and my boyfriend
were walking on the street
We just came back from the mall and
we were turning a corner
Suddenly a car came swiving around and
my boyfriend was hit so
he was on the windsheild
The car was still moving
and we were both screaming
I ran after the car as it tried to stop.
Then, another car turned corner
and the car my boyfriend
was on crashed into it
My boyfriend was thrown off
and slid under the other car
I then knew he was dead
I screamed and tried to get under the car
The ambulance immediately
came and people were gathered around
Now, all I can remember of my
boyfriend
is his death and his smile
I love you
Jason





11 thoughts on “I remember my boyfriend's death and his smile”

  1. Wow….Im sooosorryto hear that, to be honest with you when i read this i started crying. But you know what you have to do…..be strong n i promise you things will get better. Im sure nothing will ever be the same but time will heal. Listen if you ever just need someone to talk to..im a really good listener. you can im me if not you can rite me mail i will get back to you.

  2. I'm soryy… about that….. itz really sad…….i no how it feels to
    lose someone you love….it hurts really mad deep down….. and honestly….
    things will never be the same… even in time… you will always remember it….
    just think about eveythin else in your life…after losin someone you love… just remember
    they wil always be with you…. no matter what….if you want you can add me to msn to talk
    theres been alot of stuff go wrong in my life.. and when somethin this bad happens…
    sometimes you feel like you want to die… trust me…. itz the worst feeling ever….. things will get better
    but it wont be the same… i know…… just make the best out of life.…

  3. you know what is weird about this poem….. is I had a boyfriend and his name was Jason too but he didn't exactly die like that. He did though leave me all alone without him. He too died in a car accident.

  4. Im so sorry FOR YOUR LOST OF YOUR boyfriend. I KNOW HOW YOU FELL BECAUSE I LOST MY BOYFRIEND TO. I LOST HIM IN A CAR ACCIDENT.
    HE WAS FIXING A TIRE AND A DRUNK LADY HAD HIT HIS FRIENDS CAR AND SHE HIT ANOTHER CAR. THAT CAR HIT MY BOYFRIEND AND HIS FRIENDS.
    AND THEN TOOK OFF. THEY CAUGHT THE DRUNK LADY BUT THEY DIDN'T GET THE PERSON THAT HIT HIM. IT'S BEEN 27 DAYS. THAT HE'S BEEN GONE.
    THIS HAPPENED APRIL 15, 2005 AND HE LEFT US PEACEFULL MEMORIES ON APRIL 17, 2005. I JUST REMEMBER BEING IN THE HOSPITAL THEM TWO DAYS.
    I WAS TELLING HIM ” BABE IM HERE IM RIGHT HERE AND IM NOT LEAVING YOU, COME ON BABE YOU CAN DO IT I KNOW YOU CAN YOU’RE A STRONG PERSON.
    THEN I JUST REMEMBER THAT DOCTOR AND NURSE TELLING ME AND HIS FAMILY. ” Im sorry BUT HE'S GONE”

  5. Girl Im so sorry. At least he is true in a better place. It really seems to be awful to have a boyfriend.He is watching over you right now. He is your angel from above. Time will heal your pain sweetheart. Just let it in.Good Luck in future.

  6. I really love'd tis' poem it wus really sad it made me cry so much n Im sorry 4 wut happened wit yo b-friend!
    Bye good luck n hope everyting goes a-ight just tink about da moments yall had n try to talk 2 some-1- bout it if you want 2 hear is me I love 2 here u'r story I've experience tings before and alot n have cried so much
    Here is my address so you can rite me goodbye !!! 1218 E Arlington Fort Worth TX 76104 mY nAmE iS ?????? ???????? cAlL mE “sHoRtY”!!!

  7. Im so sorry about your boyfriend I would cry for
    days if my baby died in front of me. I hope you
    two were happy so you can have your happy
    memories to remember him by.

  8. hey! Im sorry to hear that about your boyfriend! If I was in your place, then I would feel ashamed and scared too!
    I guess you just have to remember all the good times you to had together and remembered what he looked like and all the positive things about him! NOT the negative!
    Just remember gods listening, I know whenever i'm upset I pray to god and he litens! So maybe you should do the same thing too! I will be thinking of you and Jason! God bless!
    R.I.P! jason! Mwa xoxo good luck!

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