You Had My Love from Hello

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You Had My Love from Hello
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Every time you talk to me I don’t no wut to say
bcuz every thing you say to me takes my breath away
I cannot express my feelings bcuz you have stolen all my heart
the thought of us not together tears my world apart
when Im with you its almost more than I can take
it feels like Im dreaming .. and I never want to wake
I never want to lose you I always want you there
always there to lean on always there to care
“forever and for always” you will have my love
but “forever and for always” just isn’t long enough
so keep it for eternity or for just another day
but no matter how long you want it my love is here to stay
so every time I have to leave and give you one more kiss
think about the words I’ve said and please remember this
…as time goes on together I no our love will grow…
…by the way I never really told you, but “you had my love from hello”…





84 thoughts on “You Had My Love from Hello”

  1. It’s a nice poem, but why is it that gals always put the blame on their nxt catch….somebody answer me pliz. I said all the nice things to her, read all the nice poems, talked on phone at night but she says she doesn’t want a relationship..she only wanna be friends…

  2. Your poem was amazing, you have quite a talent. Keep writing. What you wrote is exactly how I feel when it comes down to love! xoxo Brittany

  3. It's a nice poem, but jeez, if 'u' 'r' gonna post it on
    the Internet for the entire world to see, wouldn't it 'b'
    wise '2' try and spell out 'ur' words in regular English,
    instead of typing like this? It makes you look very lazy
    and 's2pid' when you abbreviate three letter words. At
    the very least, it shows you are only fifteen years old.
    And what does a 15-year-old know about love?

  4. That was most definitely one of the best poems I’ve ever read in my life! I was shocked to hear that a 15 year old is capable of this distinct talent. thank you for your huge contribution to American poetry. Keep writing!!!

  5. I thought you're poem was great. I read it and
    showed it to my bf. He thought it was sweet .
    You have a great talent, so keep on writing poems.
    Good luck.

  6. That was an excellent poem.
    I really enjoyed reading it.
    It doesn't matter about age though,
    these days 15-yr-old can be quite mature.
    And everyone has their one perspective of love
    which changes through time.
    Your talent in writing is very impressive
    and I hope to read more of your poems.
    Keep up the good work.

  7. There are comments about how it's been spelt, and what people think of this, and how well love is understood. I think for this poem to say what it does, there is a decent understanding of love, and however it's written it gets the message across… whatever happened to artistic license?! Surely that allows you to write it however you want! I think this is a very good poem, and i will be making sure the few people I know that appreciate poetry read this one! Good on you for such a great poem! Take care of yourself too!

  8. I really enjoyed your poem and hope you write more,
    i wrote it in my poem book to show my friends and
    they can send you their commments!
    i love to write poems,
    *-* Courtney*-*

  9. As i read this poem it made me think of my last realationship
    and all the trouble that we went through. But this poem made
    realize something that i really didn’t know when we were together.
    It made me realize that i really do love him.

  10. Your poem reminded me of my last realationship
    and all the problems we went through. But as i
    read this letter it made me realize something i
    did not think about. it helped me realize that i
    really do love him. Keep it up .

  11. Look that kid jonny we can do wat eva we want to if we feel like abbreiviating then we will dude poetry does not have to be spelled perfect that just it came from the heart and can make sense SO think about it BY THE WAY YOUR POEM ROCKED SO MUCH THAT HOW I FEEL RIGHT NOW

  12. i love this poem so much it made me cry. i wish i could write as well as you. i think this poem is wonderful and it takes everybody breath away when they read this. i love this poem so much.

  13. i forgot to say keep up the good work. you are a wonderful writer. good luck on more poems you write and hope they are a beautiful as this one. peace

  14. Hey man that poem was great i mean you got to the right
    spot, that’s just how i feel about my girl. and look Im
    only 15 but trust me i do know about love because any
    one can fall in love no matter what age they are, i don't
    care about what any one else thinks…. but love has nothing
    to do with ages if you if you noe who you want to be with and you are
    an understandaball person is enough you don't
    have to be a adult to now about love, i mean what do adult
    s noe about love when all they want to do is fight and get
    mad at each other. I hated it when they think that they
    noe more then someone that’s 15 when that’s not true
    i know what love is but only stupid people that only because
    they don't know about love they think that no one else does
    and only cause we are younger and they are older but they
    still don't now sh** about love. They don't know the feeling of
    love, they don't know what its like to look at the person you love
    and feel with anergy and to feel very happy.
    well man that’s all I have to say, but i loved yo poem tho. keep it up
    and don't let no one tell you what the hell you feel or what you can and cannot feel.
    see you
    pz

  15. Hey man that poem was great i mean you got to the right
    spot, that’s just how i feel about my girl. and look Im
    only 15 but trust me i do know about love because any
    one can fall in love no matter what age they are, i don't
    care about what any one else thinks…. but love has nothing
    to do with ages if you if you noe who you want to be with and you are
    an understandaball person is enough you don't
    have to be a adult to now about love, i mean what do adult
    s noe about love when all they want to do is fight and get
    mad at each other. I hated it when they think that they
    noe more then someone that’s 15 when that’s not true
    i know what love is but only stupid people that only because
    they don't know about love they think that no one else does
    and only cause we are younger and they are older but they
    still don't now sh** about love. They don't know the feeling of
    love, they don't know what its like to look at the person you love
    and feel with anergy and to feel very happy.
    well man that’s all I have to say, but i loved yo poem tho. keep it up
    and don't let no one tell you what the hell you feel or what you can and cannot feel.
    see you
    pz

  16. i think your poem is really gd it makes you think about how much you do really love someone and that if you love them that much you wouldn’t let them go

  17. Hey. I just absolutely LOVE your poem. I no it off by
    heart. And frankly johnny u'd be suprised at exactly
    how many 15 yr olds know exactly what love is
    about!!! Yeah i just love the poem and the words
    shortened does not make a difference to me.

  18. I write a little myself and I was thinking about quitting. But after reading your amazing piece of work, it has recindled my love. Keep up the good work, because that was the best I've ever read.

  19. I loved your poem.
    You are one of the million people out there that have talent.
    Have you ever tried to get in a poem contest?
    I think you should.
    I love poems that rhyme and make sense and yours do.

  20. Hey! my name is amanda and i love your peom!
    i hope you don't mind but Im putting this poem
    on my xanga site and chaning the last line to you
    had me from hello because i am all about that
    because that’s what my relationship is all about!
    My whole site is about you had me from hello! if
    you want you can visit it and comment me back!

    Amanda

  21. fantastic! awesome! great! wonderful! is your poem. actually the word fantastic was the first adjective that came to mind I don't know how. I just wasn’t able to describe your poem. It’s the best poem I’ve ever herd in my whole life. Keep it up

  22. yea this poem is a bit special its perfect for the situation im in at the moment i loved i read it and i was like : O
    coz im in a relationship with my first love and its perfect for us. i fort my own love poetry was good but this is something else

  23. Hey, I just wanted to say that the poem, You had me from hello. was a good one. I reminds me of my boyfriend and I. Keep up the good work.

  24. I loved the peom it reminds me of me and my bf. we havent been dating long but i don’t care its still one of the best. just wanted you to know that
    ahslie

  25. it's beautiful i love it, i love how it rhymes an dit';short and sweet with alil deepest to it too. It's lovely. i'mm write it in a letter to my boyfriend.

  26. your poetry is amazing. it makes me get the chills just reading it. i think you do a FABULOUS job and you are an inspiration. maybe i can send you some of my poetry some time!

  27. I just wanted to tell you that i really love poems and altely I’vent had the chance to look into them as much but i came across yours and it was really nice….i just thought i would share that!! take care!

  28. i think that All ages can experience love, being in love when you're
    a teenager is the worst, you don't really understand love properly and believe that
    people love you when they say they do but are lying reallyeven though you may hav given your heart to them, it hurts all the more.

  29. Hey i loved this peom it really is just lk what i feel lk with my boyfriend Cody
    it was Wonderful and i hope you made it for a right reason

  30. i love your poem its perfect exspressing how you feel and i feel
    just about the same and i do the same thing with abrievtating words im only 14
    so that couldbe why but its perfect you should put your talent
    into books and publish them so ……………………………

  31. OMG.. this poem is amazing
    im so touched by it
    i relate to it in so many ways
    i just want you to know
    that you should keep writting poems like this
    for it makes me cry
    not just of tears but of love and of pride
    and if you writre poems like this
    youll make others cry
    and they will be touched to
    such and i
    they will understand more
    not only of love but of a single tear of joy
    Im a poet to .. not a very good one
    for im am only 13
    and still half way there
    im learning very quickly
    im never gonna give up
    coz poetry is mah life

  32. u r veeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyy talented on your writng pieces and i writ poems myself to maybe we should get together and write poems together i will type one for you thank you and write me back

  33. That wuz the sweetest most preetyest poem I’ve ever
    read I wish I had a love like that I don't even have a
    boyfriend sucks I know but anyways that wuz awsome.

  34. i loved this poem its so good i liked it. it reminds me of my ex bf of a year and ten months. this is a poem that you'd want to use or say to give to him or her when you break up if you men broke up because i think it'll mean the wold to them if they heard how you really felt about them. i thought of something like that to my ex bf but then again he and i are not together anymore but that’s besides the point . other than that i reallly enjoyed your poem it was amazing i still think that everyone should use it when they're depressed and or just broke up with their gf and or bf because it really expresses your feelings in alot of ways thank you for your time and greatly love your poem email me and let me know what else you got in store for all of us you did and awsome job on this poem again

  35. UM CORY iF i WAS YU i WOULD REALLY CARE
    WAT DA man HAS TO SAY!!
    CUZ LiKE EVERY GiRL SAYS men LiKE TO hurt US
    BUT your POEM WAS SO FREAKiN AWESOME!!!
    SO JUS KEEP UP your GOOD WORK
    AND don’t WORRY ABOUT WAT THEY SAY

  36. Re: @scripter
    Scripter, “It’s a nice poem, but why is it that gals always put the blame on their nxt catch….somebody answer me pliz. I said all the nice things to her, read all the nice poems, talked on phone at night but she says she doesn’t want a relationship..she only wanna be friends…”
    Because she doesn’t want a relationship..she only wanna be friends…:-)

  37. Very touching … by the way my love started with a hi :) … but yea it ended with a good bye too … But still the memories make me love her more… even though my love is not there with me … Thinking about the time which I spent with her makes my day … I liked the way you wrote expressing your feelings in a touching way :) and I wish your love SHOULD grow as time passes :) … thanks for sharing it …

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