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Torn

Torn
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I used to think being alone was the worst thing,
but honestly its having some one and still feeling alone.

Ive given my heart away
hoping we would marry someday
but now things seem so dull and grey

i love her with all my heart
but she loves me with all of her imagination
confused, her heart cant decide
if its better to just hide

she thinks but she does not know
but when she smiles its an amazing glow
she speaks with a graceful flow
but the gap between us seems to grow

she causes me pain
and drives me insane
but she also makes me smile
im completely in denial

im torn in two
at times i say I’m through
yet i can not let her go
for what i would do i do not know

it hurts
it feel good
it goes up
it crashes down
its on
its off

i fear the pain of losing her
more than the pain caused already sustained

im lost in my own mind
my two halves grind
and everything wont unwind

so one question remains
do i stay
or do i go





2 thoughts on “Torn”

  1. Hey first of all I need to tell you that your poems are filled with words that are truly heartwarming. :) And I really felt ‘me’ when I read the first line itself ‘I used to think being alone was the worst thing, but honestly its having someone and still feeling alone’. Believe it or not I have gone through hard days where my life was rollercoaster; I think it would be better if I say my relationship was a roller coaster. Finally the day came when the relationship actually torned out. But for you I sincerely wish you the best of things and I hope the situation changes in coming days. :)

  2. I enjoy this poem very much. It’s something I can relate to. Being in any sort of relationship can be hard when it seems like a loyal and faithful and suddenly it seems not to be. And the hardest thing of all is when that person is with you and you still feel alone, I have to agree.
    But when it’s an on and off relationship, I have to admit that the relationship become distant and you just basically have to let go and nothing can change that flow.
    I like it very much. Keep up the good work! :]

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