What do I have to do?
I can’t tell you
Use your brain
To see Im in pain
Agony in fact
Has deep impact
Crushing hopes dreams and ambitions
With no inhibitions
You could at least try
To stop shouting when I cry
To stop nagging when Im down
Or stop talking when I frown
Work with me
Not against me
Push me along
Not back to where Im from
Im trying so hard to pick myself up
But Im stuck
And you’re not helping
What do I have to do?
To show I need you
I can’t kneel on the ground
You’ll kick me around
My insides already bruised and broken
My words already spoken
Your ears always shut
And you can’t even look
At the daughter that came from you
You must be ashamed
So am I
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I like the way you are expressing your feeling.
I know how you feel, its not a good feeling
I totally relate and loved this poem.
that’s my life in a nutshell.
thank you
Its amazing how well that poem relates to me.
Good work. I hope that you find what your looking for.
Millyem,
i know how you feel i feel the same way to but
the only reason they yell when your crying its not like
they don’t understand its just they don’t want
you to have to feel that way!! i'm only 13 and i've
been through 3 yrs of being severely depressed!
i know its not fun and it really hurts inside but you
will make it through!! i know you might not do this
but i'm just sayin don’t cut yourself its the devil
that’s controlling you that makes you do it
and its not worth it b/c god is there for u, you just
might not see it so just be true to yourself
and never look back and just be yourself!!
You do know how much that relates to me!!
Thank you
This poem reminds me of my sister. Only it's not her we're not listening to. It's us she's not listening to.
wow. I love this poem. I can really relate to that cause I'm going through it right now. My mom always gets angry at me because of everything I do and then at one point basically it felt like the whole world was against me because my family could only say bad things about me that aren't even true and my friends pretty much turned their backs on me for a while and I felt alone and depressed and just really worthless. I've been trying to be normal and happy again but my family still constantly puts me down and then the other day my mom wouldn't stop yelling at me and I broke down and cried and she just kept screaming and finally somthing else got her attention and she quit yelling and it took me a few minutes to stand back up and stop crying. Whenever I get really depressed and upset and hurt I just go to my room and listen to music, write poems (i don't post them online), and think about things and cry and after I cry I feel better cause I let some of how I feel out.
Hey,
ok i like the peom it makes alot of sense and i can
tell it actually has a purpose. alot of poems that i
read have no purpose of being written! Hope that
your feeling alot better about your dad. ( Im
hopeing that the poems was about you dad other
wise i am a dumb-ass).But any ways i write alot of
poems, but thinking them up and all the words making
sense is tricky! Good luck in the future.
-Taylor
wow! that’s such an amazing poem. it totally relates to my life. even tho im a man. it touched me seriously. i want to thank you for writing this and posting it so i could read it. it totally made me think about my own life. i know this might not sound “manly” but i cried once i read it. yes Im very sensative but still. thank you again. Uve helped me in ways you cannot imagine.
I love your poem! it rocked the werid thing about your name is that
my nick name is em and another is Milly! well g2g goodbye z
hey, ilove this poem, its the best i've seen yet!! love it! email me is you want
sounds alot like MY mom too lol
Wow this is exactly how i feal,my mom is exactly what i thought of when i read this
poem and i just can't get her to listen i don't tell n e one about it and i've only broke down
in front of her a couple of times cuz when i can control myself i wait till i get to my room
cuz if she sees me she just makes fun of me after she yells or i just go to my room before
she hits me and what realy gets to me is she tells ppl about it and starts laphing but i just don't
tell ppl about it cuz i know i will get out of it in a couple of years and never need to come back.
till then i'll just take it no mater how many times i think of ending it cuz i know i'll end up with a beter life.
gtg she's comein' home in a couple minites and when she's home i can't be doing n e thing unless she said so.
Wow this is a great poem i can relate to this soo well omg i guess your poem put wat i'm feelin into words which was wat i couldnt do~thank you
i think that that should be my name where the author goes…this poem is me? what i think, feel , and those same words..Im ashamed and those involved and those who are “friends” that are constantly with me should be too…for this is not michelle and they know..but sooo into themselves to say or to just talk….but just one fact is known to all…where would they be if not for my words, my ears, my shoulder, my strength (then)!!! like the song “Where were you when i needed you most!”
Amazing poem, I must say. The thing about its that such simple, everyday words have so much meaning.
The subject is also a very sensitive one, and it was bound to grab attention. Very nice.
This is really a great poem it really explains my relationship between my dad and i so i know how you feel, now that I’ve read your magnificient poem i will soon be giving it to my dad after he sends me off because he dosent want me anymore! THank-u so much and you did a wonderful job!
that poem is deep I was depressed last year to da point where I just wanted to disapear I was alone no one understood me but some how I still had a little hope in me and I tried and tried to keep my head up I never gave up now look my life isnt as bad I don’t regret nothing I went thru cause it has made me so much stronger, so that’s one big advice I give you to always keep your head up think positive everything is goin to b ok
omg…that’s great i do poetry writing as well and omg from 1 poet 2 another that’s fantastic
you have great talnt!
LOVE IT!!!
Wow, you have an amazing ability. I write alot of poems myself but the truthfulness and honesty in this one blew me away. Sounds like you know where you want to be just gonna find the road to take you there
Hi, i jst wna say your poem rokd and it rele expressed my situation right now as well. Every thing you put in the poem is exactly how i fl and Im sorry your going through it aswell, im glad sumone understands me love mel xxx
you're really talented. i can really relate…especially teh part 'you could at least try to stop shouting when i cry.” you've helped me realize im not alone!!
i go thru worse and try 2 kill myself
Dude thatz a awesome poem but try to hang in there and i hope things get better
Girl. You put it down. You know exactly what your writing. Your awesome with your words. That poem made me stop and think, that your totally right. Keep your head up, things will go your way. Just keep writing like that. You have talent. Peace out and Be good. Much love, Laterz
hey your peom was really good. I'm looking for ideas for lyrics. I'm in a band and was looking I think it would be a great song. That' all I wanted to say though. Great job.
Gosh, I really love this poem. It's great how you can write your feelings. I wish I had your ability! I’ve felt this way before, but I just kept praying to God to help me and he did. God is always there. All you have to do is want him to help you and he will. I'm praying that you will soon be able to not feel the way you feel at this moment. I know it's hard!
hi im brittany and i can really fell this poem deep down cuz I’ve been through the same thingsthe peot isgoing through i feel that this peom should be read to every young girl in the united states i love the peom so it great
i really liked this poem, it rymed real good. I like to write poems like these.
Wow, this poem is like… my whole life in a
compact shell. It's amazing yet really crappy that so many people relate to this poem, and it sucks a lot, and I feel you on this one.
my dad is like that but a little bit worse i like your poem its great
i lie this poem a ot because it explains alot lie how some kis=ds get along with there parents and more
Wooow this poem is so good,
it's like how i feel about my life,
exactly 100% right!! I love this poem!!!
^^ great work =)
I know just how you feel, I went through that myself.
This poem is reality. amazing words.
thank youx
i want you to know, that even though rite now, you might feel like the only wat to get out is to die, there are other options, like your friends, but you have to know the right pople to choose to be your friends. But don’t worry, wen a real friend is there, you'll know…
I know how you feel. It sucks. You must rock. I love this.
i like the fact you tried and its good.
but the way its in rhyming couplets takes
away from the real meaning of the poem
i know how it all feels, but i don’t have a dad, evrything you said makes sense.
this is a great poem, I guess your right about it all
your poem must do a lot to you when you write,
I hope that you have more because I like how you
set this up and I could read it so easily that it makes
me feel the same way.
Of all things, you should continue on and don't stop,
I hope that your own problems don't continue out of hand…
E_mail me please,
Cindy
i like your poem alot keep it up your a good wrighter
hey i've seen a lot of people relate to your poem..which is very expressive, now i know i'm not alone in the world thank you…i can say it's me today
that’s so sad…and…wrong…and awful!
AWESOME poem! i understood what the poem was outting out. keep up the great wrok!! your really good at poetry!!
<3ME!
I really can understand where you are comming from. My dad is the same what and sometimes it feels like he does not even try to understand. He always yells at me when i cry, but i cannot controll how he makes me feel. thank you for writing this now i know that im not alone.
this is really good. and i feel exactly like that. let's talk sometime. my aim is crazyyylooper
i real y like this poem…..its so ironic.
i didn’t expect the end……good job
that poem reminds me of my babys dad man
i like your poem it reminds me of my closest homegirl she goes thru alot of stuff specially with her parens shes even thought bout killin her self!!!
omg i love your poem its so touching!
wow this is depressing. i feel the same way. theres this ass that i like and he snapped e in half.
this is a very good poem indeed and it brings a lot of memories to me of what i lived through before.it is touching and it is real.
I can feel your pain while reading this poem! So sad! Hope you stay positive throughout your life. Know that even though people may not be there for you like you wish they were, you can always find power within yourself to be there for yourself