The one I love

The one I love
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The one I love with all my might.
The one Im thinking of tonight.
The one that helps me make things right.
The one I long to kiss goodnight.
The one I dream of when I sleep at night.
The one I think of when I hug my pillow tight.
The one that makes me happy
when she comes into my sight.
The one Im not giving up
without putting up a fight.
– To “The One” that changed my life.





25 thoughts on “The one I love”

  1. WOW!!! If only I could find a boyfriend that felt like that towards me I'd be all set. You're one is so lucky to have you and that was very sweet of you. I don't know many men that would get intouch with their feelings about a girl like that and I think more should! WHY CAN'T THERE BE MORE men LIKE YOU. You are a lucky dawg!! lols xoxo Brittany

  2. I recently lost someone in my life that I loved with
    all of my heart. His death really is tairing me apart.
    Your poem made me smile for the first time in along
    time. Keep up it up because you have something
    there

  3. i think it's about time you let go of this girl! your
    poems are amazing ana obviously
    come from the heart, but it seems to me that
    you are a little obsessed with someone who
    obviously wants nothing more to do with you in
    theat respect! move on with your life, and find
    someone who can and will appreciate the love you
    have to offer. don’t waste what time you could be
    mutually enjoying with someone else!

    1. Jenny I do agree in an sense but if that one truly loves you the way you do then they will allow for you to make the necassery changes for the better of both of you. There are people who actually love one another with prinicple love also. however I love this poem it touched me.

  4. hey noel well i love your poems a lot and you must like that girl a lot well you are also so cute and find you should find a girl that really does like you and i love that Spanish poem man i wish some body could love that much you are a great person and you should for get about her.and start a new life.okay

  5. This is a really great poem, it has alot of soul. I think Jenny should be quiet obviously some man has done something to hurt her and that's why she thinks what she thinks….. I think this is a great poem. I myself am a poet and I think this is really great work… Good Job Keep It Up Mate
    mwah xoxoxo

  6. please make a poem that rhymes ABOUT A
    GIRL AND A manAND THE manIS 15 AND
    THE GIRL ONLY 12.. SHE HAS MANY
    SIGNS HE LOVES HER BUT SHE does not
    BELIEVE IT BECUZ HE IS SO MUCH OLDER AND MANY PEOPLE AROUND
    HER RELATiveS AND CLOSE FRENDS
    HAV SAID HE LOVES U. BUT SHE STILL does not
    BELIEVE THAT AND SHE WANTS A SIGN THAT
    that’s REALLY RIGHT AND
    SHE CAN ACTUALLY BELIEVE THAT HE
    LOVER HER BAK..AND ITS NOT JUST
    A DREAM

  7. WOW…THiiS POEM TODALY DESCRiiBES
    THE WAY ii FEEL ABOUT MY __SOMEONE__
    RiiGHT NOW..WHO EVER YOU ARE
    WiiTH SHOULD BE ONE LUCKY LADDYY>>
    =)

    *BARBiiE*

  8. This was the best poem i love it it makes me think
    of a mannamed “Joel”
    Hey i wanted to tell you that if you can please
    Right a poem about:
    A GIRL WHO LIKES THIS manAND THE manLIKES
    THE GIRL BUT THE GIRL IS TOO
    SHY TO TELL HIM WHAT SHE FEELS ABOUT HIM
    AND SHE DOESN'T KNOW WHAT TO TELL HIM.

    PS. e-mail me

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