No need to feel this sorrow
Cast down as sons of war
Triumph rings true
Fallen angels surface the gloomy sky’s of chaos
Portrayed tragedies
Words of lost hope, depression, and anger
Unveiled as teenagers that took their own lives
No need to feel this sorrow
Cast down as sons of war
Triumph rings true
Fallen angels surface the gloomy sky’s of chaos
Portrayed tragedies
Words of lost hope, depression, and anger
Unveiled as teenagers that took their own lives
profoundly beautiful.
do u think i should have added more?
well, in my opinion i think Haiku, and short poems are beautiful than those long ones. But that depends on how we express our feelings thru poems, but this one i like it the way it is. :)
your gratitude is greatly accepted :)
Beautiful poem