Pain no more
I hate the way I feel everyday,
I hate to say I aint going to stay,
I'm slowly going to fade,
I cant take no more of this pain,
It's all too much nothing to gain,
I plan my escape,
then I will feel free and alive,
with no more tears to cry
- David
1 Comments:
I used to have a visitor who kindly advised me not to post depressive poems. I appreciate his advice. I try to avoid negative words. However, I do think it's a sweet attention and positive encouragement if the poem is published. They do need advice and they do need to express! So here it is, and sorry David, I did modification. I would suggest you to read the comments on the following poem and the comments on other similar poems and they may be of help; you can also write down your specific story or your thoughts in detail and you will be able to get more constructive advice.
Escape
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