Maiden Poems
On this page I will publish some very first maiden poems by young people. Their work may sound unskillful or not like a poem, however, I finally decided to give them a stage; who knows a future poet will probably be born here. Please give them more advice and encouragement. Thank you.
What is love
Love is life
Loving someone means having someone by your side
throughout your life
Love is what you make of it
Love can mean anyone or anything
Its what you want love to be
- Lashana Ramoo
How do I tell you
how do i tell you when your not listening
how do i tell you the words that your missing
how do i tell you the way you make me feel
if the words that im saying dont seem to be real
how do i tell you when you turn away
baby believe me your my sunshiny day
how do i tell you your my only one
baby i cant when you say this talk is done
if you wanna play your games
if you wanna scream and shout
when i wanna say i love
sometimes i really doubt your lies
sometimes i scream your name
but if your not there to listen
i shouldn't get the blame
you cant hold me when i cry
you cant wipe my tears away
oh baby cant you see there is nothing i can say
so how do i tell you
- Katie
The One
the one in my dreams is like a sweet child
the one i love is the one i kissed
the one who loves me like i love him
the one i think about all the time
the one who makes things right
the one is my one and my one
is the one for me
- Adjee
Quote
Have fun with many
Trust a few
Give all to no one
- Rocio
Someone
Theres always someone you care about, Who doesnt know your there,
But when it comes to talkin to him the chances are so rare.
You always seem to think of him when you close your eyes,
So as you sleep time doesnt seem to pass by.
I dont really understand why this has to be,
But the way I feel about you is oh so clear to me.
- Breanna Torres
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1 Comments:
To Lashana: you start to explore love; you will be able to write better when you understand it more and uniquely
To Katie: it's more like a song and rhyming in a nice way at the beginning. We need some modification advice of the middle part, maybe just like this:
if you wanna play your games
when i wanna say i love
sometimes i scream your name
but if your not there to listen
i shouldn't get the blame
The best to tell him is:
oh baby cant you see there is nothing i can say
so how do i tell you is it goodbye baby
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